As Equestria And The Planet Of Equus Itself Is Turning Into The Planet Of The Dinosaurs, A Family Of Teratophoneus Attempt To Live In This Planet That, while it Once Was Paradise, Is Now Being Transformed Into A Kind Of Hell For Its Inhabitants, including any new additions. We Follow this Family In their Struggle To Survive in This new World.
(This Is A loosely-based-off Spin-Off Of StrangeBehavior's My Little Pony - The Age Of Dinosaurs)
All Hail The Great belnett For His Amazing Editing Skills! (Prequel-Ch.II)
Cover Art From The Amazing Kimba the White Lion!!!
Seriously, Give All These People The Thanks They Deserve! And Pay Them A Visit Once In A While, Alright?
Chapters (4)
Before any of you start complaining about the characters, there's an 'alternate universe' tag for a reason, people!
6406370 How dare you come to me with nothing but negativity? You are a beginner, you have no idea how this story will go. now be gone! and never return! You got off lucky this time, kid. but next time, I wont be so lenient.... watch your back, because I'll be chewing on it.
6428075 Deleting comments just because you don't appreciate what a user said is never a good sign for possible new readers
6428115 My sincerest apologies, but all he was doing was nothing but hate, and this is no hate site. I do apologize, especially to someone of your high stature. I just hate unrestricted hate, as to why I came here.
6428233 I understand your point, but still next time, even if they're full of hate or just blank stupid, don't delete them cause your new readers can't really know if you're indeed saying the truth, plus, let's face it, if someone feel the need to show it's stupidity by saying something like "this story is shit".
Then it won't hurt anyone to see that indeed, this comment is pointless and it's author, quite dumb, or a troll.
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I really wish I knew what you were referencing...
And I didn't come with negativity, I was only offering some constructive criticism! I was a ctually extremely careful with what I said as to not offend you, but if you can't accept feedback, then according to FCC you aren't allowed to be sold in stores.
I don't know what that means, but you can't be any more experienced than I am with writing stories if you can't take even light pattering, let alone full-on flak.
I just hope you can be more receptive in the future. I'll be unfollowing this story as I'm no longer interested in whatever you have planned.
6428356 Wow, thanks...
It wasn't meant to be offensive, I just said that prehistoric creatures magically obtaining knowledge of proper english instantly was a little bit off. I know I said something else but I can't remember what lol!
6431362 Like i told Hirohito, i couldn't knew what was your comment about since it was already deleted
So since i couldn't really trust him about the content.
i just tried to give him an example of some comments who even though are meaningless...are better to not be deleted since it can lead the readers to assume that he can't take critisicm if it was indeed a constructive one.
So really there was nothing against you here, and nothing offensive
My bad if you felt targeted though
6431394 No worries. I made a mistake in interpretation and you apologized. According to Canadian social customs I forgive you lol
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as i said, i am deeply sorry. i often times overreact to things. i need to learn more self control. i am ashamed....
6434613 it's okay dude really, i wasn't blaming you or anything, just giving an advice for the future
6434613 Don't think twice about it. Shick happens!
I made this just now, so it hasn't been edited or messed with in anyway. tell me if I messed something up.
Is the story done
6587811 nope. Not even close.
6587854 But they died?
6587861 All will be reviled....in time.....in time.......
6587861 C? I fixed it prematurely.
would this take place in a world like theirs or a world like ours....basically equestria or earth version?
alright you caught my attention...and shits bout ta get real
please continue zis story
6675786 I will, the problem is that I am lacking editors at the moment, so I can not publish what I have completed.
Perhaps you could help me look for a new editor?
ill give a shoutout when i add a chapter to one of my stories and see if anyone is willing, but it will probably be next weekend when i have the time. but yea ill see what i can do.
6678225 apologies, but my other editor has returned, so call off the serch.
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OK, you know what. Had to fire my old editor. I need help again.
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OK, on second thought, i need help. Like, right now
just got chills up my spine cuz im excited to read this!