When conjoined twins seek conversion, things were never going to be simple. Joined together for all of their lives, for Conversion to be successful, they would each have to give up something close to them - their twin.
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Let me be the first, sir, to say just how awesome you are.
Bravissimo!!!
Very, very creative! Nice job!
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Argh, but now I look back at it, I can see a number of errors. I've corrected the biggest, but there are a number of smaller ones.
Glad you liked it!
Again with the genderbending, Midnight? hehe
Very interesting read. Strange, but interesting!
You're a mad, creative genius! I love how weird this story is while being believable and logical. I think even Pinkie would be impressed by this story.
Keep it up! Your execution is even better than your ideas are. Thank you for another entertaining story.
Also, all those who don't comment on this story are cowards. Especially the ones who read the entire story and enjoyed it. Pony up and comment!
Very unconventional. This is one of those stories that helps to cure my writer's block.
My only criticisms are that it would have been nice to see more of Julian and Jack's background, and perhaps to flesh out the last section, where Marcus visits. But I really enjoyed reading this.
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I'm tempted to expand on it, to take it further, but do you know that feeling you get when a story is at its current end? Yeah, I kinda get that vibe.
Keep yer chin up, though, I'm not hanging up my typewriter just yet.
Man, just something i hate about CB fics, i hate how humans are turned into ponies, id rather have the humans die out on their own, no matter how painful it is, than have little "pacifists" mock us. We are better than the ponies, we have Guns, we have UAV scanners, we have video games. And then all of that is gone, when u get converted, you get to run in grass, and fly around... sooo fun....
Still good job writing it though, i know that people who like CB fics will love it.
Wow, I completely didn't see that coming. I'd love to see a continuation, or a followup, simply because of the unique nature of their new relationship. It'd be interesting to see how they cope with the "brother/mother/child" thing going on. Though I completely understand if you feel it's complete as is.
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Well, if one became a unicorn, all of those could still be used.
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Seeing the comments, and thinking about it, I think this WILL get a continuation. I'm not sure about backstory because I'm not sure how believable I can write a conjoined twin, but I will take a look at how things have changed for both of them.
Nicely done Midnight, the twist with turning them into mother and foal was not one i saw coming (I was originally expecting the nannites to Convert them as younger ponies, but your ending was much better now that i think about it haha)
Well done and very interesting story and I really enjoyed what you did with the twins. Black cherry nannites
very clever!
I dunno what the last commenter saw, because I certainly didnt see the problem. Conflict is needed? Not really. There is some conflict to be sure, but nothing uber like it sounds like you'd like. As for the story being ridiculous and "just bad", thats bull. The solution to their dillema was creative and unexpected. But in a good way. I enjoyed the surprise. Im elated even. Hell, I cant wait for a little epilogue. Pace it as well as you had here.
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...and that's the whole issue. Sigh. "tl;dr".
NMS did, he didn't like it, no problem. I note others thought his frank dismissal odd, so mayhaps there were some preconceived notions within?
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I could describe Star Wars as "a farmboy becomes the most powerful wizard in the galaxy".
I could describe "the birds" as "people are attacked by seagulls and die".
I could describe "not alone" as "alien race invades and then leaves again"
If you're happy with that, then take his summary of the ending as all you need to know.
I didn't expect that. At all.
It was brilliant and utterly amazing. And moving, so moving...
I'm blasted. I can't even find the right word to express how I feel.
Thank you for the read.
My reaction to this awesomely hilarious fiction in two videos:
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sooo... that's good then :D
2715733 It made me scream and laugh at the same time, it's very good.
Oh my god, Midnight, why did I just now read this?
I very much want more.
I knew he was going to be a pregnant mare. It was the only way both of them would survive.
Neat.
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I actually thought they might both be foals.
Okay I'm going to echo everyone here: that was unexpected. I knew they would survive but not in that way...
That's was a unique solution.
I really like this.