Hello! I'm Grim, the Reaper of Souls... in training. These stories are what goes on in my mind while I'm bored.
Just a few Halloweens after that... incident....Jack Skellington opens another one of the doors, but what he finds isn't just a holiday...
Watch Jack stumble through adventures in the most unlikely place possible!
My first crossover.... Constructive criticism is welcomed. Anything for me to become a better writer.
I hope you enjoy!!
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I'll give it a read later, but overall good concept and simple idea. This is a great thing to do for a first story.
I will give you a review when I can find the time, but until then, good luck with your first story.
Here is my constructive criticism. You need more chapters.
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Pretty please with sprinkles on top.
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And, tracking.
5986583 Of course there will be more chapters. I wrote this whole thing in a single Saturday!
5986466 Thank you!
Honestly, i can't believe that there aren't more stories like this!
Very nice
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5987236 Next chapters coming at 9:00 Central America time! Get here at 8:58 Central America Time, and when the clock changes twice, refresh the page a few times!
nit pick, Princess Twilight is an Alicorn, part of her whole transformation.
5987385 Thanks for catching that so early, it's fixed.
5987337 is it AM or PM?
*squees*
The Pumpkin King in Ponyville? Oooh, this gonna be gud! >:3
Nice use of Jacks "What´s this?" song by the way.^^b
5987509 Well, apparently A.M.
5987516 Thanks! I'm thinking of putting an optional chapter with the entire parody song.
Good job on the chapter.
Yeah, that seems about right...
It would be funny if Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo came dressed as Lock, Shock, and Barrel
5987948 Your wish might be granted. *Insert epic foreshadowing here.*
5988389 ooooooohhh, epic foreshadowing.....I LIKE IT!!!
5988518 I try to take suggestions from my viewers. It makes them happy and at the same time gives me ideas.
5988617 True, it makes everybody happy.
ch.3 now pls
This looks promising although it felt a bit rushed. I'm excited to see what you'll do with the idea.
5990822 Soon, KillWolfSatan, Soon....
I agree with 5991136— this feels a bit rushed, but you've got my attention. Nice rendition of "What's This?" by the way. I'll keep an eye on this one...
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So, it's going at too fast of a pace? I think I can fix that, but any tips on how? Still new to writing.
5992428 I'm no William Shakespeare but...I do know that putting more details to the surroundings of the characters usually helps.
5992455 Thanks for the help.
Oh look! What's this? They're hanging mistletoe?...
little do people realize mistletoe is a pony.
oh no! a situation where we need rainbow to get violent! quick jack!
5997629 Really? Good thing I didn't put that in the parody song then, that would be bad. On the plus side, she might turn out undead!
And since he is dead, he can take off his head!
Love this so much
more plz
Ooooh, I like this~<3
I was so disappointed to see that there weren't many crossovers with this continuity - but this one seems to have the spirit down
Looking forward to seeing more~
Wow. The first non-gore/mature fic that I actually found interesting. I love it.
6459508 Thanks! Always appreciate support(it also motivates me to write).
It's one week (okay, 8 days) before Halloween. You are now required to update this story.
We must have more! 
I love how you used the song.
You ever going to update?
7005024 Yes, I'm just extremely... writer's blocked. Incredibly, even. Plus, lots of homework doesn't help.
7005150 ok, I love this cross over Story!
7005813 Apparently, you CAN get writer's block and absolutely no motivation for 10 MONTHS STRAIGHT!!!
7005818 Hmm... How about rewatch The Nightmare before Christmas & S2 & S5 of Nightmare Night episodes and think of what Jack would do in the Ponyville.
Oh well. Fun while it lasted :/