In the frozen north, a few species of animals are still yet to be befriended by ponies. Following some light research, Fluttershy makes her way up to the Crystal Mountains to observe and make friends with the frost bears in the mountainous region, but she finds more than just bears in the snowy region of the north. When she returns to Ponyville with her discovery, the mare must make decisions that are not only best for her, but for the foal she now claims as her own. With a big heart, she gains more than a new friend, she gains a family that struggles to be normal when the little filly is anything but normal. Fluttershy will learn what it means to love unconditionally and teach a young filly just what it means to be family.
Chapters (7)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO CUTE I NEED MOAR
This was cute and well written.
Though you could use better spacing in the story, it hurt my eyes in a few place to read this.
Other than that, great job I look forward to more.
I like the story.
Thank you for your comments. I hope you have enjoyed it so far. I will try to get the chapters out in a timely manner. So far the second chapter is my favorite
5981994 I did my best to break it up a little bit more I hope it is easier on your eyes this time around.
I run into this problem often; I find a story that's--frankly--awesome, but the actual writing is...bleh, for want of a better term.
A total lack of interjections where they are most needed, more than a couple repeated phrases (example: Although frightened, Fluttershy although frightened, Fluttershy withheld), and Fluttershy only really goes "Um, er, uh" when she's around other ponies. Not when she's in her element (working with animals).
I think you would benefit greatly from having a proofreader or editor of some kind. It might slow down the process a tad, but it's always good to get a second opinion. You can easily hire one for the low, low price of putting their name in the story's description.
This has the potential to be a great story (is it just me, or does everyone like the idea of Fluttershy being an adoptive mom?
). Just a touch of polish will make it so much more digestible. I look forward to coming back to this in future. 
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In all honesty, I'm not the best editor, but I have worked hard to improve the quality of the work to the best of my ability, especially at wee hours of the morning. I'll scan through to see about the issues you have pointed out, but if I were to have him rewrite it, then it wouldn't be his work, but mine.
We both thank you for the constructive criticism, though! Please feel free to point out things I have missed if you'd like. I'm always open to discussing it all in PMs.
Night Rush nvm
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6026744 nvm
The Spacing is slightly better, still room to improve.
I'm enjoying this story alot, it is cute and warm to read.
Not sure but the pacing in this chapter, felt off Idk I can't place a hoof on it, but I want to maybe say one or two scenes bumped the pace off balance.
The fact I can't pin-point it-might just mean I'm tired lol.-In all lovely chapter- I'll be following for more on this.
SO CUTE!
I saw this chapter posted, merely seconds after reading chapter 2 lol.
Well the pace was great in this chapter, Spacing is getting better.
I did see a few error's here and there, Fluttershy spoke redundantly in a scene, Fluttershy's note doesn't say anything about the foal, then jumps right into the foal as if the friends would not actsurprised at all lol- it felt confusing.
Anyway just a few like I said, as for characterization It's fair- I get a feeling the hoofmaid is doing quite too much, I don't feel as if Fluttershy is getting the main edge of raising a child.- More like a second hand teaching to her instead.
I'd loved to see a scene instead of the hoofmaid making all the food etc for fluttershy and the foal, fluttershy instead learned how to make formula etc- it would have felt more natural.- I know the hoofmaid is trying to be helpful, but imo she is coming off as too helpful.
Overall this story is enchanting, I'll be reading this to the end.
Then offer a Rare Review.
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I adore reading your comments and I'm not even the author!
I agree about the hoofmaid doing too much. I like your recommendation and will work with him on ensuring that the hoofmaid can relax while Flutters does a bit more.
that's my birthday have a like
Much kawaii
Hmmm. Reading this story I have to say it has an overdose of cuteness. anyway It was decently written but I like the concept. The story kept me engaged and wanting me to keep reading to find out more. I hope to see more of this story.
Okay small mistakes aside this is a joy to read. I can't stop smiling and laughing, this story so cute!
It's like a basket full of fluffy baby bunnies. 
plez more book
I am sorry it took me so long to get this out I do not have as much time now that I am in my new job but I will continue to work on this story when I get time.
I have two predictions 1 racist ponies ran the bat ponies out which will come to light later and cause problems for little wyntre and 2 they had a migration of somekind (unlikely but not impossible) and the child got separated and we will the birth parents later causing trouble for flutters.
Love the story so far and wyntre is adorable.
Gotta say, a little rushed. I can just tell if you had given this a little more time and thought, it would be much better. Still, gotta give credit where credit is due. I've been waiting for an update to this fic for a while, good to see it isn't dead. I give it a 7/10 with room for improvement
7118125 thanks for the input. I do my best to give each chapter my full devotion and while I agree that some parts could have been elaborated on, I thought it best to move along. The primary purpose of this chapter was as a transition and a set up for things that are to come. Thank you for continuing to read my work. There will be more to come soon.
7121113 How could I not read this? Its friction' adorable
7121113 the cuteness is too much kaboom
Fix the double whiles. They sound funny in the same sentence together. I am sorry I didn't catch that before you posted it. Also, fix the few spacing issues. There are just a few inconsistencies. The transfer from Gdocs to here sometimes gets really funky.
Love you
Too adorable.
To think it was a CMC that said that... oh the irony!
it was one year ago today that the author was last online
Awwww!
Can you finish the store please and thank you I like you to finish the story more good