Where Would You Like To Go

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Short stories from the third view perspective where the reader is presented the imagination and persistence each foal has. I proudly present you these short tales of wonders and adventures. To remember those days where we dreamed big.

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SomeGenericPonyNameHere

SomeGenericPonyNameHere #1 · May 14th, 2015 · · · Chapter I ·

Heh heh, reminded me of my younger days when I wanted to learn how to ride a bike. Didn't learn it until my adult years, and still have troubles with steering XD But this reminded me more of the jubilescent (?) times as a kid. That wide-eyed wonder we'd get at anything exciting, running about with boundless energy (much to the chagrin of our parents) and that naïve sense of limitless wonderment we'd get from finding a new discovery. And being an older sibling myself, I was more in Tia's position. It was funny to see her be woken up by an overly excited little Luna, and the happy pride she felt at her sisters' success at achieving the means to really fulfill her dream....there's no other feeling quite as heart-warming as that moment, that much I can honestly relate to.

Another beautiful piece in my honest opinion! Bravo!!

TimeRarity64

TimeRarity64 #2 · May 15th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter I ·

5978157 That's nice to hear, darling. Very. I'm glad you liked it too! And shared an interesting story too!

SomeGenericPonyNameHere

SomeGenericPonyNameHere #3 · May 15th, 2015 · · · Chapter I ·

5978664 Normally I try to just keep a review to a minimum, directed more towards the story and what I liked about it. Being an older sibling, it sort of struck a cord with me though. Lovely piece again, my dear. Please keep up your great stories!

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