This is the story of Twilight Sparkle, a young unicorn living in the Kokiri Forest.
Ocarina of Time, deconstructed and redone with charaters of the show MLP: FIM. I will take some "licenses", so you may see some scenes that don't fit the ones you saw in both the game or the show. Lots of thanks to LeHummel for his editing and scripting aid, and thaks also to ~awildfantasy (her gallery can be found at devianArt here: http://awildfantasy.deviantart.com/gallery/ ) for letting me use this picture as a cover for this fic. Please, leave your impressions on the coments.
Rated Teen like the game Ocarina of Time, due the violence and all the killing stuff (but never ending on the gore side)
Chapters (2)
Very good so far, but there are some errors in spelling and grammar. I would gladly proof it, but I have too much going on with my own stuff right now.
Still, it is a very good idea. Watching this one
Those rhymes.
You might want to work on those a little more.
Otherwise it's a decent set-up. Though I am surprised that Ganondorf is a stallion instead of NMM, Discord or Chrysalis.
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Beleive me, those ryhmes were a pain while i was thinking about them to make them fitting with the original words (at least, to it's meaning). I am not too pleased with it's result, but that should do the trick by now. Maybe later it can be fixed. Now, is time to work on the next chapter. Thanks for the comments
yes! another zelda the ocarina of time crossover however i wish there was a twilight princess crossover
pretty god so far, I like it!
*prologue, not prologe.
Will comment more after reading.
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Oh sweet Celestia...
The funny thing is that i already wrote it fine in the actual chapter...
Anyway, thanks for telling me the mistake.
Watching this, as you might expect.
keep up the good work! Though it could use a proof, it still conveys quite well!
Ok, Chapter 2 published, and chapter 1 edited. The story haven't changed a lot (only did a little but important change), but i added some music to keep the story more tied to Ocarina of Time.
This took me longer htan usual to read, but that was because I was on EQD at the same time. I am ashamed at the delay.
Very good. I liked it. Recalls me back to my old times of OoT
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Well, that means he's either DisQord or Sombra, the latter of which is a better Ganondorf to me.
Yes, I'm a fan of Sombra. He's cool.
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I wouldn't refer to Discord as a stallion, and keep in mind Sombra wasn't even a rumor when I made the comment.
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Wow, people stumbling upon this story a year after i made those two chapters? Maybe i need to post chapter three before the end of this month and keep it alive...
As for the coments by itself, i have all the characters in it's right place, so, for the sake of not spoiling things, i only will say that this fic was made during S2, so don't expect anything S3-related.