7 Years have passed since Twilight and Spike came to Ponyville. However, Twilight is now dead. The mane 5 have split up. After Spike gets out of an institution, he walks back to Ponyville, and soon after he gets a letter. He have to do 5 trials. Will Spike be able to to what he can to see his dear friend again, or will he fail miserably?
Note: I am aware there is probably bunch of grammar issues, But I hope it is alright anyway.
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This is quite interesting. Pretty original if you tell me!
Need to stay tuned!
Like how Spike has a therapist. Really sets the mood on how goofed up everything has gotten for him. Keep up the nice work.
This is a very new idea... And i LOVE it. Heavy Rain all over again.
You will make me cry dude =')
Well so far, this has peaked my interest. I wish to see more.
This is going to be one weird storyline given the team of Spike and Pinkie Pie.
this is funnier than it's suspending
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Sad fics scare me.
Well looks like a heavy rain story. And i like it.
7 Years have passed since Twilight and Spike came to Ponyville. However, Twilight is now dead
Legit.
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Why, yes. Heavy rain certainly inspired me
An editor is what I recommend for this story, otherwise it's pretty good so far. We'll want to know how Twilight died, exactly. Perhaps you could tell it as brief flashback sequences that tell a small part of the series of events leading up to her death, eventually telling us exactly what happened to Twilight right before Spike completes these five trials. I'll watch and see!
Wow,this can end very sad or with a surprising end !
It all depends on that how the writer gives a buck.
But for celestia sake dont make a sad one,or maybe a happy-sad ending
I think this is really good, looking forward to coming chapters. but I agree with what incoherent orange said, a lot of proof reading needs to be done to it. Also adding a bit more insight into how twilight died and things like that would be awesome!
wooooooooooow very interesting fic 0: !!!!! i want to know how twi died D:!! and really spike gonna kill somepony for be with twi D:!!!!! great work i want to know wut wil happen next !!
Please let it be blue blood please let it be blue blood.
608770 To answer your question: Yes, her death is going to be explained most likely (as you said) though a flashack.
I will do my best to get someone to proof read the future chapters.
Hm, interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next.
I think I know how this will end....
Not bad. I did spot some grammar faults here and there, but I'll let them pass
*Pondering noises* I think I like but I believe the story can be dramatically improved with some wrangling in of your spacing, and you might wanna do a few more grammar checks. It's nothing serious but randomly capitalized letters, and stand alone sentences kinda make things hard to follow at times. Despite those minor problems I think there's a rather interesting story here given enough smoothing out of the rough edges.
Good chapter. Looks like one down, four to go.
Edit:
Given the circumstances, I think the choice is pretty easy.
Twilight Sparkle Prince Blueblood
Element of Magic Selfish
Caring friend Rude
Smartest of Main 6 Cold Hearted
Voice of Reason Stole Rarity
Save her! Shoot him!
its...... getting interestingly weird
797307 Is that good?
797866 Of course it is, you got me totally pinned to this story
, the only bad thing is that the chapters take a lot to be here
still this is an amazing story
798253 At the moment, I am stuck with other projects! I will see, and get to the next chapter quite soon.
Plz finish it and forget all other stories
but still I'm loving so far 