• Member Since 8th Jul, 2013
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Fiddlesworth the bear


I'll be back....someday

Comments ( 25 )

How exactly do you lunge someone down a flight of stairs?

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Carefully. /obviousjoke

...What the hell did I just read?

Sir, while I admire your tenacity, Is this truly the best use of your time?

Glad you added the sex tag, otherwise I'd have passed this one up. It got me to cum.

You're not even trying to hide it!

At least it is'nt Flash Sentry.
#give flash a chance

But the most important question is: Does it keep happening?

5981038 probably. I wasn't meant to live long.

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Gave Flash a chance, he blew it by being lame for two movies.

What I just read???

5990541 Applejack falling down a flight of fucking stairs.

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-.-
(not entertained)

Well that was... interesting. I wasn't able to review it before due to the school blacking it but I got around it. It's weird but funny.

6021376 No problem. I'm working on my other stories and seeing where that goes.

You hurt applejack and you aren't funny. :facehoof:

6596239 I didn't hurt her. I killed her ya doofus.

6596699 Which involves hurt.
Also, If you don't try to improve your writing it'll keep on being down-voted, and I really hope you're not just writing for controversy because that's the sign of a very, very bad author. :applejackunsure:

Edit: After looking at your motto - comedy has no bounds, I have something you might want to take into consideration
- Comedy does have bounds that make it funny, and comedians learn these and approach them in innovative ways. I know I already said it, I highly suggest you read this article.

6599307 humor is based on whether someone thinks it's funny or not, so you may not think it's funny, and all the people who disliked it may not think it's funny, but i at least know there are people out there who thinks it's funny. humor isn't based off of some Wikipedia guide.

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Did you even read it?
and if you wrote it just for a bunch of people rather then the general population, You're circlejerking which is a writer no-no. :pinkiesick:

6602931 He's saying that everyone's opinion is different.

and no offense but looking to uncyclopedia for tips on how to be funny is like getting dating advice from Elliot Rodgers

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I really hope you're not just writing for controversy because that's the sign of a very, very bad author.

elaborate on this because man I sure do love controversy and from my subjective view Spiderman the Hedgehog is a pretty great author because he writes for controversy

Comedy does have bounds

comedy is also subjective, much like your comment

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Meh. I'm probably not seeing it all, you're probably right.

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