• Member Since 30th Aug, 2014
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Cloud Striker


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5973937 Good to see someone enjoyed it. Hope to show you more soon.

Anything that's based around Fallout Equestria that doesn't make me want to gag is worth watching. Keep up the good work, I'll be watching ^^

More Enclave pegasi! :pinkiegasp:
I haven't seen many FoE fics with a protagonist from the Enclave! I will favorite this and hope to see more! :pinkiesmile:

5975528 That was exactly what I was thinking. Plus, the Enclave always fascinated me, from their first appearance on.

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Exactly! When i started writing my fic, i originally planned for the main character to be born in the wastes, but then i thought, "Hmm... Don't see many Enclave pegasi who are good guys. WHY NOT?!" :pinkiecrazy:
Lol good story, though! I'm looking forward to the rest.

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That's exactly what I thought when I started my story two years ago. I'm glad to see that there are other people thinking at least a tiny bit of good about the Enclave.
Have a like for the idea.:twilightsmile:

*Papiertig0r from bronies.de Fo:E Fanclub*

Finally! A descent story from a german brony (that almost has never happened before o_o)
But I think, you missed Copying something,

Could I even consider myself as “saved”?

may have been too much information.

And after that paragraph, the protagonist knows the name of his saver o_o,
anyhow: it's new, it's hot, I love it a lot.

5983764 Are you sure? I'm sure that Watch introduced himself.

EDIT: You're right, something got cut off.

EDIT again: Fixed it, thank you.

You should add more details, in my opinion. Other than that, I think it's great!
Well done! Can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

5993000 Yeah, I tend to sum things up, but that's how I write, I guess.

Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

6559754 Wait, what? Awesome, thanks!

6748400 np! please feel free to join the group!!!

6748812 welcome to the group!!! bring friends. :D

Good premise, but the 'enclave pegasi in deep shit' is kinda overused though, I'll keep reading to see if you turn it around.

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