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Majin Syeekoh


We’ve got dents and we’ve got quirks, but it’s our flaws that make us work.

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Twilight is troubled to find an open book on Rarity's head when she goes to help Rarity fit a dress.

Should she tell her?

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I... what.

My head hurts. This reminds me of the first time I saw Inception- Oh, wait.

All 'wat' aside, though, this was a good little drabble. :raritystarry:

What the booking hell is going on?

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

5966386 I'm glad that you enjoyed it!:twilightsmile:

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

Syeekoh, if we ever plan to meet up at a pony convention remind me to cosplay as Rarity with a book on my head, :moustache:

One one hand, there was a book on her best friend's head.

"On one hand"? "On the one hand"?

her smile turning into a look a pointed concern.

I don't think that's quite right.

That was funny, but wierd as f:yay:k. Like most of the stuff you write.
So congratulations, you made me chuckle.

This was a rather fun little read. :raritywink:

Valuable advice near the end, too. :twilightoops:

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

5966405 Will do.:moustache:


5966420 ...that's what I get for typing half of it on my phone.

Glad you enjoyed it, though!:pinkiehappy:


5966431 Indeed it is. We should all heed its wisdom.

...sorry, Syeekoh. I think you overcooked this one. It feels like a bunch of mind-shocks solely for the sake of mind-shocks. :fluttershysad: Maybe next time?

(And honestly, the very first segment of the story is a legitimate story in itself. It's not farfetched at all. I wished you'd actually just kept going with it. Maybe I will. :rainbowlaugh:)

This story can take all of my yes... :pinkiehappy:

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

5966445 Maybe next time.:pinkiesad2:

And you should continue the original thread.:pinkiehappy:

your mind is a beautifully twisted place.

Goddamnit, Syeekoh.

"Well, that's my job security taken care of for the next thousand years."
- Luna

A DREAM WITHIN A DRE-

Obligatory:

This is a thing, yeah.

That was certainly a thing.

Lol! I'm gonna favorite this!:rainbowlaugh:

I was bored... like so very very bored. Then I read this story, I was unbored. I owe you my lack of sanity good sir! :pinkiecrazy:

"I'm aware, it's the new fashion in Canterlot," Rarity said with a giggle.

read the title: The Latest Style in Canterlot

Brick Joke status: FAIL :pinkiesad2:

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

5966583 I am the wat thief.


5966636 Thanks for the catch!

This makes too much sense.

Rarity Has a Book on Her Head

I wonder who could've done that?
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This is mesmerizing.

This is something, alright.

Luna, you're needed in Ponyville. We've got another complicated one.

No, no, it's not the Crusaders. Not this time.

This was certainly a very entertaining thing. :pinkiehappy:

That was amazing.

Wow. That was a total—

Goddammit, Criss Angel, Stop interrupting me. As I was trying to say... I seem to have lost my train of thought... Thanks a lot, you crappy excuse for a hack street magician.

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

Well, I laughed my ass off at that one. Glad I am not the only one who heard that damn inception horn in his head every time she woke up. Brrrrrrrrrrrraaaaamp.

:moustache: So you trust Sweeties cooking, She burns juice for the sake a luna!

:facehoof: I'm so siiiiiick!

:raritydespair: It feels like a scroll's coming up!

:moustache: Now you know how I feel.

:unsuresweetie: Sorry

You broke my Wat-O-Meter, jerk!

Minus the whole 'Inception' angle, this is more likely to be an actual dream one would have. A dream that's a simple but fundamentally wrong snippet of life. You don't see that in fiction too often. I like it.

I don't know what that was, but it made me laugh my ass off. :rainbowlaugh:

5967828 That's probably because as soon as the brain figures out that something is fundamentally wrong, it tries to fix it. Which never works inside the dream, even if you acknowledge the wrongness.

I've had those "perspective shift" dreams before. And dreams within dreams, when you wake up in-dream but it's yet another dream.

Those nights suuuuuuuucked. :facehoof:

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

5967807 You're welcome.:raritywink:

5966763 It was mesmerizing for me as well.

Well that was certainly a... uhm thing :applejackconfused:

*insert M. Night Shyamalan "What a twist" here *

Lol honestly though this was a weirdly fun read :ajsmug:

Story: Hey, reminds me of a roblox game.
Comments: srs inception k then
Self: *muffled laugh*

8/10

PS: I am ze 70th liker.

Absolutely brilliant! That is all I can say.

Majin, you have a book on your head… it keeps dropping pages containing strange little stories.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

5970340 I should probably get that looked at.

That was one of the most wonderful setups for a pun I've ever seen.

VGI

It is a thing, isn't it? :pinkiehappy:

I believe Princess Luna is involved.

Nicely written. Short and sweet. Thumbs upping and shelving. :ajsmug:

Possible corrections:
She opened the bathroom door and looked into the mirror to discover that the true answer was far more sinister as she reflexively flexed her wing.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

5972886 huehuehue


5972891 It is a thing, indeed. And thanks for the catch!

More! complete the cycle! what happens when fluttershy does it? dashie? AJ?

The strain was too much for Rarity’s thought processes. Her mouth foamed over as she fell to the floor, her body twitching intermittently.

My reaction exactly.

That was.. wow. :applejackconfused:

She just now knew never to eat anything Sweetie Belle cooked before she went to bed.

I know that all too well. :unsuresweetie:

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