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When one of Twilight's experiments does not produce the expected results, she questions herself and her abilities.

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Filraen #1 · May 11th, 2015 · · ·

The setup was great but I found the conversation with Celestia, the whole resolution lacking, rushed.

Slate Sadpony #2 · May 11th, 2015 · · ·

I struggled with the ending and I guess it shows. But I'm glad you feel the rest of the story works.

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