Twilight Sparkle went missing, and ever since then, a certain stallion has been scrounging Equestria for her. But when Flash Sentry finds Twilight, she seems different, as though she isn't even herself. When he raises these concerns, they are brushed off. So he is left with one option: he has to figure out why she is acting so strange. With the help of a pony named Silver and a griffon named Storm, he is going to have to figure it out. Only problem is, he has to hurry because Princess Twilight has agreed to a marriage with a stallion she barely knows, and he knows that the real Twilight would never do that. Something is up, and he is going to find her.
Chapters (6)
I think it's "awake", and it's your.
And it's spelled Twily.
Good job for a newbie though.
all the way.
And it's stallions and mares. fillies and colts are young ponies.
Twily not Twilly.
And changeling alert!
5966788 Sorry, I'm still a bit new to this. Thanks for the advice though :)
5967524 Thanks :)
Error in author's note.
And okay. I'll remember....
5989985 lol yeah, that happens a lot :)
cannot.
(Or ignore me/yell at me. whatever. it's not like i have feelings or anything.)
6022767 Thank you for telling me, and why would I yell at you or ignore you? You are helping me know what to correct when I go to edit it. Thank you
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*Enter most other authors response here*<-------
6033077 Well, other authors aren't going to get any better if they ignore when people are helping them. It is quite silly to ignore comments like yours because when I edit, I miss a lot of mistakes. You help me a lot
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No, it's me thinking there's a mistake when there isn't, and them responding in a way that tends to offend me.
6034307 Ohh, well, that does make sense. Still.
I don't understand
Please update soon