Everypony tries to plan out their lives. Sometimes people must make choices and let go of issues in order to find and achieve that plan. We can all shape our own destiny, but it requires making those choices, both easy and hard ones, and even taking unknown paths which may lead to something even greater than one could imagine. Sometimes it leads to simple things, like getting some coffee with a new friend or once it has even lead to something as big as becoming part of represeting harmony in Equestria.
Making choices is part of everyday life and Wild Soul and Noble Poet are no exceptions. When the dream chasing designer, unicorn and dream searching earth pony are forced to leave the great city of Canterlot for the humble town of Ponyville, they’ll soon notice how the ponies they befriend are starting to drag them in the middle of a secret that is far larger than anything they or any pony could have expected.
Written by WildScope and NobelPoet
The story takes place at the beginning of the fourth season with original chapters and ties in with the main storyline, with a few original character added to take the story to a new direction.
Writing this story is kinda like test to us. We want to test our ability to execute a story and improve the best we can during this experience. All tips and ideas to improve our writing and storytelling are welcome. We hope we've managed to create at least a bit enjoyable story and we hope your feedback will help us to improve.
For starters you should create a synoposis that is actually talking about the story itself. you could explain what it is in a journal or something.
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Yes, we will work on that asap :)
Looking good so far. I really don't like Double Bit.
IM book is a good idea, I'm guessing it's basically like Sunset's diary in EG. Good chapter.
6015413 Yup, you're right and thank you :) Sunset's diary indeed gave us the idea to expand that consept.
6016239 Cool. I like how Mineral just automatically assumed Wild didn't have any friends. Also, do you have an update schedule, or are it just as chapters are written?
6019330 Thanks :) Well, we really hope we could have faster schedule, but because we're busy in our personal lives at the moment, a new chapter will be published weekly. We do have many chapters written already, but they must still be edited.
Nice! That pizza place sounds really good!
Because of the cover art I think Soul's gonna get Rarity as a tutor, but maybe not. Anyway, cool chapter! It would have been nice to know what Mineral's art looked like, but hopefully I'll get to find out sometime in the future.
6094236 Thanks! :) Yes, I can say that Mineral's art will be revealed a bit more in the future.
first, yay new chapter, second, way to stick it to the man Noble.
let those words burn the witch
as her reign comes tumbling down
at the cruel laughter of ones she praised
nothing left but the smoldering pride
-Jasmine Tea
Nice work! Yay for Noble!
noticed this at the scene where Soul meets noble. Think it mya be a typo. not to be nitpicky or anything
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Oh! Thanks for pointing that out! I have no idea how that got there ^^;
And soon the craziness that is living in Ponyville begins. Muhahahahaha. I have to say im enjoying this story alot. And Truffles is just so amusing
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Thank you very much! We're very glad to hear that :)
Yeah. Mineral and soul I ship. Anyway this was a sweet and touching chapter. Truffles amuses me yet again.
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Hehe ^^
So Sweetie Bell burned down the boutique. I am surprised this hasnt happened yet in the series.... Although the show is still on going. I say you captured the destructive capabilities of the CMC's very well.
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Yes, it's weird they haven't :D And thank you, our intension when writing this story is trying to stay loyal to the characters personalities from the show but also show new sides of them.
So close and yet so far, How will fate take the noble poet on the chase for the pony whos song captured his heart.
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"" Mineral had already started walking away, but she immediately stopped, her eyes widening and she turned to look at the stallions behind her with a smile. “Oh, would you be that kind? Txhank you guys! I can’t pay you with any bits though since you don’t have a contract and we don’t have time to make one, but I’ll offer you two dinner or something.” ""
Txhank is wrong just you know :D
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Oh, thanks for pointing that out! It's fixed now :)
Where did you get the cover art, and does the guy there do requests?
7030854 I made it myself, since I'm also a digital artist. It still has my old username in it which I will most likely change soon :D I don't take requests, but I do make commissions. You can check out my commission charts here: http://wildscope.deviantart.com/gallery/57096064/Commission-INFO
Does Noble have a crush on Twilight?
If I were Noble, I do more than just shout at Double Bit.
For a manager, Double Bit is an idiot!
I'm surprised that Noble Poet use to be part of the Royal Guard and that he's also friends with Princess Luna. Also, he has nothing to fear from Twilight Sparkle, especially since she usually never holds a grudge against any pony.
Also, despite being a fan of FlutterMac (shipping Fluttershy x Big Macintosh), I find it very delightful that Noble Poet has a crush on Fluttershy. Of course, if he decides to court her later in the story, he'll have to endure some of the antics of her friend, Discord, and he can get mighty defensive of anypony that he feels is getting in the way of their friendship too.
Answering those questions correctly fills you with determination.
They're moving to Ponyville. Prepare for the rabbit apocalypses, random evils, and sheer lunacy that is the small town of Ponyville. And Pinkie Pie. Can't forget her.
Ten bucks says the two of them hightail it outta there.
Welllllllll, it's the end of the world as we know it.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
You know, I know Soul has his limits, but he should at least consider getting more friends in his life, especially since Twilight and her friends are the best kind of ponies to befriend in the entire world.
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Very true, let's hope some day he will learn to be a bit more open ;)
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That's precisely what I'm hoping for.