A young changeling leaves the hive for the first time ever, despite his... lack of talent. His assignments: Spying on Twilight Sparkle, not being caught, not being a liability to the hive, not stranding himself. He fails at two of those.
Look, I mean no disrespect at all but either Vinyl has a gender changing ray or your typing isn't that great, now I do think the story is cute all the same, but please try to make the gender of ponies a bit more clear in the future
isn't Octavia going to point out she doesn't play the violin, or is she being nice X3
Wait is Vinyl a mare or stallion? It just kept switching throughout the whole thing.
5961566 i messed up only once because when vinyl first came out i thought he was a stallion
Cute story. Next page!
Nicely done! Keep writing, I'll make sure to read it.
5962108 where are you up to?
5961335 She does play the violin! I think...
Look, I mean no disrespect at all but either Vinyl has a gender changing ray or your typing isn't that great, now I do think the story is cute all the same, but please try to make the gender of ponies a bit more clear in the future
Octavia plays the cello