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Taialin


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I wonder which one of them told Spike about this?

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One of the fundamental problems with any Rarity ship is that Spike has been established in canon that he has affections for Rarity, and this often needs to be addressed. For the sake of writing a good, tight story with a clean storyline, I chose not to elaborate on this particular part of Rarity's life. There's no doubt that it is a part of her, and she is considering it; it's simply not being shown "on-screen," as it were.

Please understand that not every ship with Rarity is a Sparity, or will necessarily make Spike a major part of the story. It is unimpeachable that Spike is a very important character. But he is not an important character in this story, just as Spike does not appear in certain MLP episodes. If that's what you're looking for, I'm afraid you won't find it here.

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I know you have! Hopefully you get what that "24 Hours" title to my blog post means now, hmm? :yay:

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Oh, hi! Didn't know you'd be on board for this one, seeing as you never told me you read Language. But I'm glad to have you back! It's gonna be a long ride. :pinkiehappy:

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Be quiet, you! The story proper hasn't even begun yet, and we have a long way to go!:raritywink:

5959460 I have to say it came to me later then id admit

Oh boy, the awkwardness is going to be so extreme. I hope Fluttershy doesn't get too hurt.

Perhaps when I return to the Boutique, I'll bring Ellipsis with me.

Rarity, you own a cat, that is a very bad idea.:facehoof:

5960823 Tweety somehow survives... Cartoon logic dictates the bird wins.

After reading all the stories in this series I have to say that I am vastly impressed with your writing ability, you are a good author. I thought that you did a fantastic job in the characterisation of Rarity and Fluttershy. I liked this opening chapter to this story and am glad that you are continuing on with this pairing. There needs to be more Fluttershy/Rarity stories out there!

Anyway I look forward to where you go next with this story and I cant wait for the next sweet update. I present you with a like and a favourite in regards to all stories in this series. I commend you and can't wait to read more from you in the future.

Have a good day my friend!

-Frost:yay:

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Whoa. Thanks a lot for the praise! :pinkiehappy: It's nice to hear things like this, especially considering how much time I spent tweaking this series and how mixed the rating is for this story (though I have an idea why that is, and I think it's rather shallow). It's good to know that that effort hasn't gone to waste.

And I agree with you: there is a distinctive lack of Flarity on this site, and i'm doing my best to rectify it! :yay::raritywink:

5963727 I appreciate the help. Try as I might, I cannot write it all.

I made you one of those things where it's like a rendering of a character/characters from a story.

"Fanart", I think it's called.

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One of the fundamental problems with any Rarity ship is that Spike has been established in canon that he has affections for Fluttershy, and this often needs to be addressed.

Did..I miss something in the show or did you mean Rarity. :rainbowhuh:

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Yeah, that is what I meant. :facehoof: Thanks for catching that.

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Oh, ffff— . . . I'm not supposed to be getting fanart yet! Take it baaack! I mean, that's . . .

I'm speechless. That's all I can really say at this point. That, and "thank you" feels like too ineffectual a word to use.

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Well, I owe you one for all the times you've helped me out on stories. :rainbowkiss:

5968858 Actually both are correct. Spike genuinely likes Fluttershy, even if his crush is on Rarity, and I'm fairly certain if two of his best friends got together he'd rejoice. After all, he's had to watch Rarity crying over idiots like Trenderhoof who don't even recognize her feelings.

Seems that Rarity is starting to feel the issues of not being able to love someone's body as well as their mind.

Oh that was close! Well, another chapter or maybe two and the fecal matter will hit the air movement device.

5975370 yeah im kinda worried. I want to see this story have a happy ending for both ponies but im not sure if rairity really gets one the way the situation is. Like its not terrible but i cant imagine it being much fun to not be attracted to your partners gender. Sheis giving a lot to fluttershy, which is in character, but i wish it was more equal somehow.

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Gosh, now I wanna write a story with that title: When the Fecal Matter Hits the Air Movement Device. So much potential. :pinkiecrazy:

I guess fluttershy is starting to find confidence in how much she means to rairty.

Sure enough, I see Fluttershy, wide-eyed, staring at my body as if she wanted to consume it.

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but anyway I'm loving this fic and cant wait for more :yay:

I know it's supposed to be sappy..But Fluttershy's love for rarity seems like a drastic obsession rather then some sort of true love, putting someone on a pedestal like that with worship.. It's a bit creepy to me.

And of course, here's where it should prove interesting. Rarity is heterosexual and has no interest in Fluttershy's body (beyond aesthetics), but at the same time Fluttershy's slight obsession and delicate nature means she might be pressured into it regardless to avoid hurting her which is a painful thing to do for a relationship.

Should prove interesting to see how this pans out.

Aaand, there it is! I am so looking forward to the next chapter.

They may not be as strong or fast as Rainbow Dash's, but I would take these over hers any day.

Unless I'm falling to my death, which happens more than it should, Rainbow's wings are great for getting out of that.:raritywink:

And there it is. Well Rarity, what do?

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I lol'd so hard at that gif. If Fluttershy was actually staring exactly like that at Rarity's body . . . :raritydespair:

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Fluttershy's self-esteem isn't exactly the greatest, so her love might indeed play out kind of like this, bordering on obsequiousness. She actually does believe that Rarity is better than her, hence the "perfect" and "goddess" monikers.

And you have to believe that of all ponies, Rarity would be the one who would enjoy the attention. :raritywink:

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:raritycry:
Ah. Touché.

Rarity's about to do the wrong things for the right reasons (most likely with disastrous results); or she's about to discover that somepony else was in denial all along... (In other words, Rarity's gonna Rarity :raritywink:)

PS: Simply because I couldn't help myself :fluttershysad:

Well i guess that awnsers that then. Sex is gona be a chore for rairity. She is repeating her mistake from that fashion show ep where she tells fluttershy whatever to make her happy but none of what rairity actually feels.

I hope fluttershy has some ideas to make it more comfortable for rairity, or even manage to get rairity excited to be with her somehow?
But given fluttershys gender, im not sure how it would be doable.

Thiiiiiiis won't end well.

But what to do. Rarity is in the horribly unenviable position of being homoromantic, and heterosexual. And it is doubtful Fluttershy would be satisfied by anypony else. :applejackconfused:

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With a title like that, it'd have to be a Twilight story.

Talk about pussying out.

Ah, this turned out rather poorly for both of them. On the other hand i doubt it would have gone better had they done it later down the line, just more painful as the expectations would be higher.

Perhaps it is for the best that fluttershy rushed it? She should understand now that rarity's mismatch in terms of physical attraction is kinda a big deal.

I'm unsure if this issue can be resoveable for them. Rairity is immensly put off by sexual intimacy with fluttershy, heck thinking back she entered the relationship mostly for fluttershy even through she adores fluttershy mentally speaking.

Good work on the descriptions, it was like watching a train wreck in action.

10/10

funniest sex scene I have ever come across.

A train wreck. millions are dead. goodbye my sides.:rainbowlaugh:

6019183 She probably didn't even notice it, Rarity has basically been giving, giving, and making sure to hide any problems from Fluttershy with anything involving it, anything that she thinks would hurt fluttershy seems to be hidden away, which is what worried me about the relationship. She's simply doing everything because of how fragile she thinks fluttershy is at times.

I do applaud you for sticking to your convictions through this whole thing. Nice job turning it into a horror show.

I look forward to the meltdown coming next chapter, and for how Fluttershy deals with it all.

man I cant wait to see what happens next! The optimist in me still hoping things turn out well but then the pessimist slaps him.

Okay I can't continue reading it. This is just horrible and sad now and gets worse with every chapter.
RariShy is one of my favorite pairings, but this... is just no.
Where's a sad tag though in this story?

I already can see where this story is going, because I saw a few similar stories in the past.

In the end Fluttershy is going to get magical help from Twilight to change her gender to male for periods of sex with Rarity and Fluttershy will be for some reason okay with it. And they would live happily ever after...

No, I don't like it when stories focus on sex but characters can't have it until one of them would change their gender. It just doesn't work for me. Sorry.

Aside from that it was a very well-written story. But just... no. It's incredibly awkward and bad already for both of them. Just not a fan of "changing gender for the sake of other pony" stories.
And I can't see it work for Rarity without changing gender of Fluttershy at all now. And I was hoping for a sweet story with nice sex scenes...

6019702 I can see how you would think that, but I happen to be a bit of a connoisseur of this ship, I have preread this story to the ending, and without spoiling anything... you're wrong about your assumptions. This story does not need a sad tag. Drama, maybe, but then any story with Rarity involves drama.

The mistake our lady is making is to assume she knows how to lesbian. True fact, not all people can deal with oral. Rarity in particular is a major dirt-germophobe. Of course she's having problems. But instead of talking it out with Fluttershy, she forged ahead and tried to do exactly what she knew she couldn't do.

She might even come to be able to do oral at some point, but one has to be aroused to ignore things like unpleasant smells. At the moment, she cannot be aroused by Fluttershy physically. It's a problem, but not an insurmountable one.

tldr: don't make assumptions, this is just a downbeat in the story.

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That actually makes sense.
Okay. I'll read and hope for the best for both of them. I'm sorry for making quick assumptions.
Thank you for your reply!

I just feel so sorry for Rarity and what she's going through... :raritydespair:

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Steel Resolve replied to me... (dies)

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Please, don't misinterpret my over-reaction above as calling your story bad or anything like that.

It's so dang well written, and characters are spot-on!..
so, you can actually feel Rarity's inner suffering.

It affected me and caused that comment. Sorry. :pinkiesad2:

6020038 Good! That means Tal is doing his job! Buckle in, because this is where it gets really unlike any other shipfic I have read.

That, was a little painful.
I am awaiting next chapter.

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