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Braeburn was lost in the woods. That was until he met Daring Do. Together, they traveled to find the mysterious and dangerous Golden Seeds of Maretania. Will such different ponies succeed in their adventure?

Special thanks to my friend, OkamiWolvesForever.

Part of Equestria Daily's Writer's Training Grounds.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

Nice set-up, now where is my popcorn?

oh my goodness!

Miss Do does seem a little hard to get along with. What a great way for the CMC's to get introduced to her.

I enjoyed the meta commentary Braeburn interjected into his story. How will it end???

LOL! Durn fencepost. Now the torn vest makes sense...

This was pretty enjoyable! I like how you divided it into chapters to separate between third and first person writing styles, and Braeburn's story is both unbelievable and probable, thanks to what he claims happened to him and conversely how he reacted to the events. Great job!

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