Spike is moarning his friend Rarity. wont say too much but hope you will like it.
please give feedback on the good and bad stuff.
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kennel hoof
my name is Kennel Hoof and the name belongs to both the red and green pony. gonna be a story about that at some point.
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To be honest, i only click this because of the word 'croosroad' in the title
I liked this. It was short, but dense with feels. Probably the main criticism I could offer is that there were a relatively large number of misspelled words. A pre-reader/editor could probably help catch most of those next time. I think there's enough else to recommend the story that you shouldn't have too much trouble finding one.
Crossroad. You...you misspelled the title of your own story. This...this hurts lady Rarity. I too, know this pain.
5950502 thanks for the feedback and i will do a better job next time to find the miss spellings :P
5950510 im sorry but how did i misspel croosroad? Is it because it needs a "S" at the end?
5950520
Well, I am only assuming- guessing, really, you meant "Cross Roads" and not croosroads" which ...is...probably not a word, but I could be wrong.
Also, in your description I should think that the word you're looking for is "mourning"
If this is the preview for the story, it's does not bode well for the actual content.
5950535 ahh i see thank you :) i thought otherwise because i searched it on google and it didn't say that it was a flaw :P
This is both unoriginal and grammatically deficient. Hooray!
try to get an editor. that could help allot. I'm sure there are some groups here that could get you an editor. :)
5950709 yea probably :) i think i have one in mind and i know there is flaws. (from denmark so my english isn´t the best) but wont stop me from writing, just have to find a editor/pre-reader :P
5950724 it's alrigth it's understandable . :)
5950724 I may have down voted, but I'll be willing to make sure it doesn't happen next time. You see, you are a good sport. The first step towards learning is accpetance
I'm willing to proofread for you. You shouldn't be hated because you are from Denmark.
Contact me by PM and we will work something out.
5950750 sounds good and that is my trail of thought :p why should i be angry because people help me with my mistakes. i know they are there so i might aswell accept them :D
5950763
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I can barely believe my eyes. You are... Willing to accept mistakes?
I need to rethink my life.
5950770 hahaha i know it´s strange to see on the internet :P but yea why not i know i make mistakes and if i couldnt accept that it happens then i would never get better :)
also this one i have to admit was a bit rushed. i´m working on a much bigger one that im using a lot of time on so it will be good with less mistakes (hopefully)
5950724 I liked the story I don't know why there is so many dislikes.
5951217 thanks :) and well people have their opinions :P