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This story is a sequel to What Would a Genealogy Cutie Mark Look Like, Anyway?


Apple Bloom learns another shocking truth about her family tree when a certain unicorn comes to Ponyville.

Part 2 of the Genetic Research series
Sequel is here

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Comments ( 8 )

Wait I am confused you wrote it like trixie was born after applebloom which would make it be that applebllom os opder than her. If thats not the case where was trixie earlier because she went with her dad not her mom. Shouldnt she have been with him when he meet applejack?

Timeline issues aside, I loved this story! Short though it may be this tone of story is difficult to find but was a wonderful surprise. :twilightsmile:

That was amazing! The timing was really something though. I had a similar idea for my story Trixie Secretary Extraordinaire! Loved this story! Please give us more..... :fluttercry:

Very interesting take on the concept. While I won't rush to add it to my headcanon yet, it was definitely worth exploring. The scenario ("sister turns out to be mother") has actually happened in real life on several occasions (usually a teen pregnancy and an attempt to cover it up to avoid a scandal), and Apple Bloom's response to it is what you'd expect. Honestly, I'm glad she didn't get talked into accepting it right away.

Timeline wonkiness is what it is, but it works well enough. We don't have any real idea how old the ponies are (sure, they're mature enough to hold down jobs, but Equestria is a world where getting your cutie mark means you have your life set out for you, so...) and it's hardly unexpected that a teen AJ could be seduced by a smooth talker even in his late middle age. (And he might have had Trixie at a young age, too.) Trixie's reaction to his cradle-robbing was fun.

Good story. Would read a continuation.

I LOVE IT MORE SEQUELS PLEASE

This, made my day.:moustache:

Sorry for any confusion, my intent was that Trixie's father had her and then had Apple Bloom years later while at Ponyville.

I still laugh at 'step-mom.'

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