An ODST's mission completely fails and he somehow ends up in equestria. Slight AU. Could possibly become a romance. I also have this story on Fanfiction.net
Sorry, I just can't give regular updates, life comes first, ya know?
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It started really we'll however the story pacing and scene choreography are jumping around too much, you should also try pacing your plot more and show more detail and coherent writing like you did in the beginning, I won't read farther but I'll up vote your story So you can start fresh
Okay I like this and I am okay with romance as long as it is not with the elite or sun tyrant
I want the trial not this also make these longer you should have at least 1000 words and stop skipping ahead like this People want to read how someone ends up in jail not them being in jail and watching vids