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Cosmonaut


Writer/Artist who's been active since the inception of the fandom.

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5941815
Pipsqueaks gonna get it now

Eldorado
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It's great to see you back at it.

I..I just--just..I'm at a loss for words. I am not one to judge a book by its cover, but that title. A local radio station has a segment called "The Liquid Lunch" and now I will think of this story every time it comes on.What's worse, I eat when it comes on. I will still read it, but you know not what you have done to me.

Edit: Having read it, I have to say it was pretty good. I liked the ending.

Pip groaned, the pleasant sensation of a full meal rapidly being replaced with the more unpleasant feeling of being overstuffed.

Now I will think of this at Thanksgiving. LOL

5941966
Thanks! Getting back into it is difficult. I've been drawing a lot more
5942016
I love thinking up fun titles. They usually take a while for me to figure out. I like this one.
5942224
Oh yea, Rumbles a total beast
Here's some of the stuff I drew with this fic. It's NSFW so be wary opening it.

I so very much want to see this continue. :twilightblush:

I'm glad to have you back. You didn't write anything in a long time. Are you going to continue some of your old stories? "Just my type" is an old favorite of mine :twilightsmile:

Pip is dead, plain and simple and so is Rumble, lovely story as well.

5941882
Oooh - pegging sequel! Pegsqueak? Double-stuffed, perhaps, with Scoots aiming for a threesome the whole time and now knowing who's in the middle?

*Pipsqueak's

Not a good sign if an author can't get apostrophes right in the title.

There needs to be a sequel for this. Soon.
Also, eithter this situation turns into a threesome, or Pip and Rumble are going to get fucked over, and possibly put six feet under.

5949381 I agree totally. I so want a sequel but, I know how hard writing can get so I'll wait or it might never happen. Either way, I'm fine.

was good , but i was expecting there to be more size comparison/humiliation , which it turned out to be none aside from a technical size comparison....
and the cuminflation seemed kinda shoe horned in but what else can you expect from a monster dick fic i guess?.....

Comment posted by Alcatraz deleted Jun 29th, 2015

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Shaddup Pip you know you love it.

Okay a couple things.

"Gay horse blinders." Scootaloo reminded.

Oh my god that is the funniest line. Immediately set an image in my mind and it's just plain silly.

"Holy shit your dick is so small! Exclaimed Scootaloo.

Scootaloo pls.

Lastly, there are a couple issues with proper nouns, things not capitalized or having the right possession apostrophe added. For example:

"Rumble stuck his tongue out at Scootaloo, then, turned his head and licked up Pipsqueaks meager length in one long smooth lick.
"Oooh!" Pipsqueak gasped, his little dick twitching in response to rumbles tongue.

This error happens a lot.

But other than that, it was a very enjoyable chapter :D

Nice second chapter and seeing this is not 'complete'... you plan more? Maybe getting Pip as their fucktoy\fuckbuddy? Scoots get to try kinky stuff, Rumble gets stallion bitch to rut and Pip gets his lovely sexy dominant Rumble to fuck him silly. Everypony wins!

6146135

uhf, now mine too, you have any recommendations?

....my approval. All of my approval. :heart:

>continuing
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awwww but then what no more of what the images had to offer and it was just more plain sex? lame :/ .....

Might could use another editing pass. It's hot, and seeing it continue makes me happy, but every once in a while a bunch of punctuation would be missing and it would kick me right back out as I figured out why it looked wrong.

So happy that that this is continuing... We all know what Scoot's got in mind ;) Could use another proofread, but otherwise, it was hot, and I loved it.

6456355
Patience! I'm also working on other, new stories at the moment.

6462305 15 weeks later.

Moar. My patience can only hold for so long.

lol that was unexpected....

What is Rumble saying in the cover art?

Comment posted by Purple-Smart Heart deleted Apr 8th, 2016

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Well, I'm not sure if you knew this but, if you click on the cover art the image expands.

You leave me with that ending ;-;

Okay? Well, that happened. What now?

>“You plan on walking through town looking ten months pregnant, Pip?”
-...why not ? :3

7114102 Can we have a alternate ending where pip is really pregnant ?:pinkiehappy:

7114102
I think it's a great story, well written and maybe 1 or 2 typos that I saw. However, the idea that Scootaloo and Rumble invited Pip over expecting him to fuck rumble and he thinks he might have a chance with the guy, only to be told it was all a hoax and it would never happen... It's pretty fucked up to say the least. From personal experience, having someone play with your emotions and use you is absolutely heartbreaking and can push people into depression. Again personal experience except it was when the girl I'd been dating for 2 years cheated on me and I learned she'd been cheating the whole time. It really sucks.

That being said, I'm still upvoting this story because I like R63 pip, rumble, and scootaloo fun. I ship rumbloo anyways so it's not like I didn't appreciate the story and I really loved the writing. It's well written, and I enjoyed it ultimately, I just don't appreciate how you made the ending. Honestly it would have been karma for both of them if Pip was pregnant, and then they could work something out where they all live together, or something that ends happy for all 3 of them. That's a complete happy ending, not to say it wasn't cute how the story ended, but I'm really quite shocked how much they use Pip without any guilt. That's just my opinion though, either way, great story, I just wish you'd write an alternate ending. :pinkiesad2::heart: pls no hate, it's called an opinion for a reason~

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