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RarityEQM
Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem
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This is so awesome :)
Can you make it longer?
5942974 Hah thats what she said
To sad for me it was anthro(
Interesting.
Can't wait to see where it goes.
Some friends Twilight has. :P
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Considering how much power that one has, coupled with her ability to handle potentially embarrassing situations and frustration... I'm hoping at the end of that game, she gives them a taste of what Angry Twilight can do.
5945356 Given that what they are doing is legitimately immoral and quite heinous? She could probably lay some legal charge, which could be played as straight or as comically as he wishes.
Mind you, I'd advise something else. Public humiliation in kind seems sensible, for a story like this.
In any cases, if they don't suffer, somehow, I'm calling ponyfeathers. Yes, even Fluttershy.
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OH, darling, I assure you tis all in good fun. Twilight's friends would never hurt her, and she knows it.
But yes, it doesn't quite seem fair, now does it. That doesn't sound like the type of 'game' pinkie would come up with...
5947033 Which is why she should not hurt them. Just humiliation in kind. Something scathing.
5947073 Don't get ahead of us, darling. ;)
5947079 Yes, because it wasn't painfully obvious. ;) Don't worry, I won't speculate too openly.
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Oh no, no no no! Little Twilight? What could she possibly do?
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Very curious on how you're going to handle this in a way that doesn't end with Twilight in tears, and I'm guessing her friends have got wards on them as well or this is going to be a short game.
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The comedy Tag rarely goes with 'tears' Darling. We shall certainly find out. ;)
5947161 How often will you update this?
5947161 Yes, but public humiliation often does. On a serious note, friends or not, I'd be punching people because of something like this.
That said, I realize this is meant to be comedy, but I do hope they get theirs. They've already earned it.
5948139 Well theres a reason Pinkie wanted to only play at night. ;)
5948872 Which guarantees nothing, to be honest. The whole thing could easily wake folks up.
For me, comedy only suspends so much disbelief, so I'd say it only makes sense to me that Twilight would be honestly and absolutely furious. The only real change the comedy should make is how she acts on that fury.
Whereas in a serious story she would likely beat the living daylights out of her wayward friends, in this, she's likely to do something else instead.
5949909 Twilight doesn't quite strike me as a violent pony, darling. She's come to love and cherish her friends, so that's going to go a long way to keep her from transforming into some psychopath just because she lost her pants. I highly doubt beating the daylights out of her friends is very likely in a serious story, or a comedy. I just don't see it in her.
5949929 If she's pushed hard enough she has shown a tendency to go downright neurotic, but again, this is intended to be a comedy, so beatings are honestly unlikely.
In the super violent sense, that is. I don't see her not doing anything. The girls have gone way too far here, and I'd say a friendship lesson is in order as a result.
Comically, of course.
Better.
Rarity, this is what happens when you try to do crap like this. The other girls were still wrong to just spring it on Twilight like they did, but at least they were willing to let Twilight quit if she wanted to.
You tried to cheat the system. This is what happens when you do that...darling.
I can also see why Applejack was so merciless towards Rarity's situation once she realized she had lied to Twilight, with her being so honest and such.
I still would be careful about asking the girls for help again, in Twilight's shoes.
In any case, Twilight got her pants back, Rarity learned she's not as clever as she thinks she is, and the girls got to touch little Ms. Twilight's butt a whole bunch, so it seems all is well.
You misused "Y'all" a bit in this chapter, by the way.
5954452 Glad you liked. ;)
And nothing too little about that butt, the way I write Twilight.
This was the plan from the whole get go, dear.
5954474 The other girls had good intentions and were willing to let her quit. They were still wrong to spring it like they did, and should have made sure Twilight knew all the rules beforehand, but they have that going, at least. Twilight could play revenge on them if she wanted, but they meant well.
Rarity tried to lead Twilight to believe she had no choice in the matter, that she was being forced to play, with literally no better goal than her own amusement at Twilight's expense. Her punishment is just.
I would still advise Twilight to never, ever, ask the girls for help with weight loss again.
5954542 please don't give away the plot in the comments darling
Color me intrigued.
Short and sweet read.
Okay, I can get down with this. At first this seemed extremely stacked and mean, but that twist made it worth it.
I would love to help with editing, if you don't mind, or have someone who has already volunteered.
5960698 indeed, I need so much help
Sure! Give me a second to re-read, and I'll tell you what I see :3
Now THAT'S a plot story. I'm tired of these ones where it's just clop with on or two lines about plot. Hats off to you, sir.
5991623 Go read Milked Mare! :D
Wait...Plot as in, Twilight's Tushy, or Plot as in a story with story?
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I meant mainly the ass, but I did enjoy the story as well.
5991924 well darling keep readIng. I tend to talk about Twilight chubby tushy alot.
5991936 needs sequal
Not bad. Would'a preferred the ponies to lose their shirts as well, and also for a smaller focus on their butts and a larger focus on their breasts. Could use a bit of grammar cleanup as well, but only a bit.
image source link is messed up....
"Rainbow Dash was the obvious choice- she was the fastest, but for Pinkie that's too obvious. She knew I'd have gone after her, first. Applejack and Rainbow Dash were in the middle of having another competition, so they'd have tried to hand off the clothes as soon as possible to keep focused on winning. Pinkie was holding the key, and I figured she'd be reluctant to let it out of her sight, which just, leaves, you. "
BAM! LOGIC MY FRIENDS! USE IT WELL!
Somehow, I doubt Twilight would care all that much for the game. In fact, the simplest solution present itself - make a quick series of teleport jumps to her own home, and in the morning, inform Pinkie and Co that she does not think she can be friends with them anymore.
6555772 Oh, but darling, wheres the fun/story in that?
This is a hilarious story! Is there a sequel?
Hey! I remember this story!
Man, this is an amazing story. Is there going to be a sequel?