12:55 AM - I realized that I haven't favorited the story.
12:56 AM- I have corrected this oversight.

8196191 XP, I hope you enjoy it.

Oh no poor Miss Vibraphone will she learn how to swim or will Hard jump in and save here.

8200970 It took a lot of brainstorming to figure them out, The idea that there basically a walking magical battery just stuck as right. As a wasteland raise, they wuld be the natural techno mancers, and can make and use weapons most other ponies cannot, not without attaching spark battery to your gun.

8203300 ya, the group was a bit too big to give them all their time to shine, I needed to focuses on smaller groups in the story.

8203409 Yeah I understand. But I think she got my attention because she was described like a mare that yelled a lot and I think she is the one with less lines The irony is rich

8205801 you are relay tearing into this comrade, I hope you enjoy the valley islands ark. Just remember that all are equal there, but some are more equal then others.

8206020 The big idea was to give off a 1984 vibe, but with everything sounding positive, unlike everything being depressing like in the book 1984. This is more based off of how politics is today, where positive wordings are often used for less then positive ideas. The Equality Credit Score is based of the sessimie system China uses today. Basically if your doing things that supports the government, your score goes up, if you do things the government disprove of, it goes down. This also relays to the people that are connected to you, so if theirs a decanter in your family, unless you cut ties with them, your score will drop. Thees scores are attached to dating web-sights, job posting, you can even get gifts. Basically it gets the people to oppress themselves. Welcome to the equilist republic.

8206337 ehhh, let's just say that Vibraphone dose not want the title "Assassin" under her belt, plus it is Harps older brother, and killing her brother in front of her, not a very polite thing to do. But don't worry, karma is a bitch.

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wow! I didnt know that. It is an interesting idea :)
Btw I finished to read! man! i got hooked up! I was reading all the day. Now I am eager to keep reading, that was a hell of a cliffhanger :)

fucking hell this got dark