Set after the events of season 4: After realizing that she has feelings for Discord, Fluttershy must figure out if Discord shares the same feelings as her. But her plans goes to waste, when strange blue, cotton candy clouds start to appear.
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I love this story alot!
I could be your editor if you want.
Oooohhh! I think I might know who the villain is! Loving it!
5997808 who do you think it is then.
5998231 um...I was thinking maybe.......Eris?...I don't know
This is amazing! Cant belive I didnt see this update sooner. Anyways, this is the best Cant wait for more
6011389 thank you and also the update was actually yesterday May 23 not 17 I don't know why it's doing that
let me guess
it's Screwball right?
6012403
Good guess.
I think it would be funny to have Fluttershy act all precious about Discord lol! Good chapter!
6013713 too bad it would too out of character but I'll give a example-
Discord:calm down Fluttershy.....your scaring me
I didn't watch that much That much lord of the rings
It's would be funny though.
What do you have planned?

Ooh! Ooh! Drama! Love it!
*sneezes* Sorry I have this weird summer cold, and it's getting on my nerves, so I'm kinda out of it right now. 
6015463 I see you have an energetic personality. Glad you liked the story!
I have lots of things planned still but I'm not spoiling any.
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwww!!!!!!!!!! OVERWHELMED WITH CUTENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
6017291 seems to me you enjoyed it
6019415 Great
and now I jist noticed a couple more things
First their should probably be changed to the. There shiuldnt be a comma after adventure and there should probably be a period after toady.
Stilling should be still and there should be a period after bed both times.
You forgot the first quotation mark before Ok.
After day there should probably be a period.
You should probably change 'I never seen her since then' to either 'I've never seen her since then.' Or 'I never saw her since then'
The only error with this is, checks. It should be cheeks.
That is all. Sorry I missed them the first time.
Again love this story alot. Keep it up!
6020352 fixed it
OH HOLY CELESTIA!!!!!!!!
YOU KNOW YOU'RE OP WHEN YOU CAN WITHSTAND A PARTY CANNON AT FULL PARTY MODE!!!!!!!

6060117 Great thanks, new chapter tomorrow morning
Awwwww!!!!!!!!! That was cute! Did you write that song or is it from something?
6062856 I wrote the song.
6062861
That's so cool! Well written if you ask me!
6062869 Thanks
The song name is called because I love you.
6065853 Everyone wants to burn Angel.
Somebody call Elmur Fudd.
6062861
Well, time to ramble.
CAN I JUST SAY THAT I LOVE THIS WITH THE SONGS AND ERIS AND FLUTTERCORD AND PARTY CANNONS AND AWESOMNESS AND JUST YES!!!
I'm not saying it doesn't need some work (if you're still looking for an editor or a proofreader, I'm always open), but it's still epic!
6067879 I already have a editor and I'm glad you like the story.
oooo who is it?????
6068801 Keep on reading the story and you'll find out.
6068835 glad you liked it
This is amazing!! I found no errors so yay!
6070871 thanks, did you read all the new chapters?
Which one is now your favorite?
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Me: Hey! Pinkie Pie!
: Yeah?
: OOH OOH! SODA!!! GIMME THE SODA!!!!!
: FUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUNFUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
: You're really evil, ya know that?
: Oh no...
: Oh, oh dear...
Me: Mwa ha ha
Me: I'm not evil, I'm just crazy.
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!
6074164 Glad you like the new chapters.
XD
Last chapter is going to be great, no spoilers!
I love the little bits when the princesses talk! It's like lololololololoolololol
So far this chapter is my favorite!!! I died from laughter at the parts with energy drink inguenced pinkies!
You are awesome
6089777 This is Pinkie Pie on energy drink.
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Who's the villain?
Hmm, chapter 8 is called Discord vs Eris... I call chupacabra!
6096204 You are late reading this anyway. So anyone reading after chapter 8 now knows the villain.
So cute!
can't wait for the sequel
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE FANGIRL DEMANDS A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

6114712 Your gonna have to wait, I still have a Flashlight story and another Fluttercord story I'm working on.
The sequel will mostly likely be in 3 weeks
I DEMAND A SEQUEL NOW!!!!!
.... Um if that's alright with you
and I sensed a sort of BoD refrence when discord was picking fluttershy up.
Anyways, I think Flutters is going to say 'yes' I not... I WILL DESTROY YOU!
6119266 I am working on a sequel, but also I'm still juggling two other stories.
Hmm, there's a chapter called Discord vs Eris.... I know who it is!!!
Elmo. Definitely Elmo.
6208272 Do you want me to change the name of it? I know since people will already know who it is before reading.