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Harmony Split


Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving

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Awesome cover art!!!

Edit: Oh... I remember editing this! Was kinda' curious about the 1st person thing... but its turning out great!

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Thanks.

Right now we're looking at 7-8 chapters. I'd like to say it won't be a long story, but each chapter keeps growing in length on us lol.

my heart is heavy with feels when reading this story. :raritycry:
I'm hoping that when Nighttide is a little better that she can open a portal to the real world like she did getting Taz here the first time.
hoping to see both back home so they can prepare for the upcoming conflict with Red.
and hoping that when the bracelets come off that rainbow dash get her wings back.

5969871 You'll find out soon!

Well, for some of those questions anyway lol.

Ooh! I think Twilight just dun bucked up! :fluttershyouch:

do I sense foreshadowing with the big hellhound:rainbowderp:

Oh and F:yay:K you twilight

but if I was the ruler even if it might kill me on the inside i might hate myself for it but i might do the same thing to my child.

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My friend scent me this after reading these last two chapters.

:flutterrage: GO Taz go to her side and never leave :rainbowdetermined2:

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we hope to have the next chapter out today

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chk out ch 4

few changes but your guy

5992801 thank you I hope your planning him on fighting taz later on. that would be interesting

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Go home and help me! I'm buried in work :rainbowlaugh:

I hope to see a side story of my oc solar eclipse the black and red wolf you manged in chapter 4. His story is thsat Wen Twilight was passed as Twilight night. She killed his son and wife in front of him. He wants to destroy love in equestria

As much as I love the kids stories I still fangirl when we have Twidash moments. I miss those moments. Hopefully in the future we will see them again.
:twilightsmile::heart::rainbowkiss:

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Of course. This was just a small focus on Nighttide and Taz I wanted to write :twilightsmile:

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It was top notched. I enjoyed every minute of it and can't wait to see all of your future works. :)

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I have to say that this was a lot of fun to do, we've never done this before so It was an experience to write like this to say the least.

Although it wasn't all that well received (whether or not it was because of First person viewpoint IDK) So We'll probably keep it in 3rd from this point on.

How do you feel making it to the end?

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Honestly I enjoyed the first person. It allowed me to get to know the character a bit better. Feel what the character felt when they were sad or angry. I can understand why a lot of your fans didn't like it. They like getting to the good parts as fast as possible without having to really bond with your characters. Plus it's truely that. It's YOUR characters. We know Twilight and we have gotten to know Rainbow Dash, but getting to really know Nighttide and Taz was a whole new experience that we didn't get with Aurora, Dayspring, or Shimmering Night. I enjoyed it very much and by the end of it I was excited to see what comes next. :) I hope that answered your question.

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No problem. I was afraid I was babbling to much. :twilightblush:

Comment posted by Raven Star deleted Jun 27th, 2015
Comment posted by Raven Star deleted Jun 27th, 2015

“Almost.” Night says as she levitates a watch to me. With a quick flash of magic it’s attached to my hoof. “I’ve already set it to go off every hour. You’ll have three hours, no more, no less,”

As dramatic and dark as this story is (or series rather.... I really have no life having gone through the entire thing up until this point in the past week or so) I couldn't help but laugh when I read this line. only one thing came to my mind...

"Then, shalt thou count to three, no more, no less. Three
shalt be the number thou shalt count, and the number of the counting
shalt be three. Four shalt thou not count, nor either count thou two,
excepting that thou then proceed to three. Five is right out." :rainbowlaugh: :pinkiehappy:

6237976 and one is just ridiculous

You gotta let me know what you think (of the whole thing) when you're done

I usually don't like first-person stories. But I read through every other single one of the TiM series stories, couldn't skip this one. It was.... I liked the story a lot, but the first-person bit still irked me. It was really nice to see a happy ending and one that didn't just lead straight into utter darkness! Yay! :pinkiehappy: Now we just need the next one to come out haha.

Awe too bad it's over. When is the next set?

6359609 We hope to start it sometime in Oct.

simply goad

good?

feathers and uses them help start the fire.

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black hills as north

in?

With a howl he reaches out and his claw and strikes

with his?

I went though

through.

between her the spears

and?

the word is simply

world.

Shimming

Shimmering.

saults

saluts.

I stopped walked forward

walking?

the check at

cheek.

This was just beautiful:raritystarry:
And there's one little filly i wont to buck in the face, good point:twilightsmile:
Waiting for next:twilightsmile:

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Glad you like it.
I'll look over the errors once I'm home

Well in this.case the Gods seem to have more mortal emotion than mortals themselves, but there is ano engraving on the side of my zippo. "God give me the strength to accept the thingas I cannot change. The courage to change what I can. And the wisdom to tell the difference."

I just spent the last 3 days reading all the stories in TiM. They are all amazing stories and I can't wait to read more stories from the authors involved in this.

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The new one is out, TiM: A Lesson Learned

Hmm... One thing I don't understand. While Nighttide did commit a 'crime', It was in Tartarus and not in Equestria. Whatever crime she commit doesn't matter, for in Tartarus there are no rules or laws. So Legally, Twilight has no power to punish Nighttide, no matter what she did, for she did not commit any crimes inside of Equestria.

Ps. 6587639 You are evil! I thought for a while that you gave up and weren't writing anymore! There was no chapter or anything pointing towards the stories being posted under a DIFFERENT Author!

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I always welcome stories written by other writers :) Especially when they're my co-writers lol.

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Hmm... One thing I don't understand. While Nighttide did commit a 'crime', It was in Tartarus and not in Equestria. Whatever crime she commit doesn't matter, for in Tartarus there are no rules or laws. So Legally, Twilight has no power to punish Nighttide, no matter what she did, for she did not commit any crimes inside of Equestria.

Foalnapping Taz from Equestria and taking him to Tartarus doesn't count?

She did do that. Even if he went along with it, it was under false pretenses. Much like a kid that gets in vain for candy and is then driven across state lines, that is a crime they could charge her with, even if her actions in Tartarus were beyond their jurisdiction.

The only reason Twilight wanted to know that is because the original crime could have been forgiven if not for her behavior down there.

Taz just blackmailed Night. Well done.
Looking forward to a solo story.

AAwwww that feels good.
But it looks like they're both fucked. Or are they?

Fuck you cream, fuck you Twilight, fuck you well trained guards.
GET YOUR ARSE IN THE DAMN GYM TAZ.
At some point someone is going to realise that they fucked up.

Taz is awesome.
Also finally another reference to `Preening is a family affair`. Damn it, no sequel.
Well anyway; everyone was awesome here.

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Could you please stop spamming?
It's nice to see you like the stories, but this is a bit... well, spam?

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