• Member Since 5th Jun, 2013
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LunarMoon


You know, I wonder who made the stars?

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I always did a LOT of stupid things, but you always forgave me.
No matter what happens, you were always by my side,
protecting me,
supporting me,
and most of all,
loving me...
This story is inspired by the poem which is also called "But You Didn't".
The link is right here:http://9gag.com/gag/a5dj2bo/but-you-didn-t
Enjoy!
PS: The picture belongs to johnjoseco link's here! :http://johnjoseco.deviantart.com/art/And-Then-Daring-Do-349247910

There's an audio version of this story released on Youtube!
Its made by this cool guy, namely...
ZeusMacD!
Here's the link to the audio version. I do hope you guys like it and thanks again to Zeus for making this audio!
Audio Version

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 29 )

This story is awesome. When I started reading "But then u didn't" My heart sank. I like this story u are awesome :pinkiehappy:

Excellent work. Straight to my great stories folder

wow,i love this story,i swear that i feel like crying now,it's so awesome and at the same time it touches the feelings :twilightsmile:

Right in the feels....

Why can I only op vote ones? :pinkiehappy:

Awesome work as always, and a great success indeed. :twilightsmile:

Instant like for the beautiful poem 'But you didn't'

That
That was amazing
Though im not a fan of rainbow dieing...Cuz...Rainbow...Fuck thats harsh to bear
Still an amazing story
10/10
Or:rainbowdetermined2:/:scootangel:

idk what you want
Take either :)

6125877 Thank you! You're awesome for reading my story too!
I didn't know that my story would make people's heart sink :twilightblush:
Hope that your heart floated up already!

6125915
Thank you for your compliment! I really really appreciate it!

6125995
I'm happy to hear it! :twilightsmile:

6129813
I'm SO so sorry for the dying part...
But... she's not dead in the show right?...

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谢谢你!} Chinese
Xie Xie Ni!
( Thank You! )

6132991 Right...Atleast thats what we assume...
Gawd dammit multi universe theory

Lunarmoon make more stories like this. I have a few suggestions, twilight,spike. Fluttershy,Angel. Luna,celestia. Applejack, big Mac. Etc... Reply if u would make another story and thx. :pinkiehappy:

You ripped this off.

6146753 if you're going to acuse people of plagiarism you need to post links or give info. otherwise you're just slinging libel and slander mud everywhere.

6146753 Hey, so you said that I "ripped this off". I can say that I haven't. Yes, I have taken the concept of the original poem by putting "But you didn't." by every paragraph and the "but you still loved me, put up on me." blah blah blah. But I changed the plots. Besides that, I haven't "ripped" anything off. I have put the link to the original work in the description. The credits of the concept goes to the original author.

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Hi there,
Thanks for your suggestion!
I think that its pretty cool and I'll think about it though :twilightsmile:
Once again, thank you for your support!
Sorry for taking this long to reply you :twilightblush:

Omg I'm crying why do people write about death it's really sad but I really loved this story

Well... dang...
I'm not sure if I'm thoroughly depressed because of what happened to Rainbow, or kind of happy due to both the good memories Scootaloo had and the last four lines...

Either way, like most stories that I've read that are about the relationship between RD and SS, this hit me right in the feels enough that it goes right into my favorites.

I thought that you wouldn’t come to visit me because you’re really busy controlling the weather and all.
But you didn’t…

That should probably be reworded for grammars sake so the verb isn't a negative, since the 'but you didn't' refers to the "you wouldn't come". The way it is now, it's saying that she didn't come (double negatives don't work)
Otherwise I liked it, it has it's to the original while still being it's own thing.

6426510 Thank you for spending time to read my story and correct my grammar mistakes. I truly appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

AWESOME...JUST AWESOME !!!!!!!

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