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After taking a job at a club in Ponyville, Neon Lights runs into an old acquaintance, Vinyl Scratch. Soon he realizes that, much like Ponyville when he first arrived, there is more to his fellow DJ than meets the eye. As the two grow closer through their work, Neon finds her to be not only a great musician, but a good friend, and maybe even partner.

Cover image by PluckyNinja.
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Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

Interesting story. I will give this story a more thorough review in a few more chapter. All I can say is definitely worth a read through.

Awesome start, let's see what happens next!

I liked the old version better, to be completely honest. Still good, but not AS good.

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If you don't mind my asking, what about it did you like better?

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It seemed to flow a little better. I honestly can't compare side by side because I can't see it, but maybe I'm just hallucinating because it's been two years :pinkiehappy:

That was a great chapter. I can't wait for the romance to start, but I think these two chapters were great for introductions. Good luck with the next chapter. This is going to be fun.

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This turned out to be a lot different from the previous versions, any reason why? Or did you just want to change the story a bit?

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Neon was a bit of a fangirl in the last rewrite and I got rid of that. Also, in the first rewrite, almost all the side characters were OCs. I thought it was better to use background character more and fewer OCs.

Like and fav, hope the next one will come out soon :pinkiehappy:

I'm so happy about this chapter. I'm so happy this story updated. I can't wait to see what Neon and Vinyl are planning. I think it is going to be epic.

Wow this chapter is unexpected but good, I can't help but to notice that your writing has improved alot. I like the pacing in this this far

That was a great chapter. Thanks for the picture. That was sweet to read. Good luck with the next chapter. Thanks for the update.

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The time between these updates is so long, but in the end, reading it always leaves me satisfied.

Awww, too bad this was cancelled. I really like this story.

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