Takes place after Rainbow Rocks.
Discord is an young troublemaker. That's what got him kicked out of a few schools. Now, he arrives at Canterlot High with one last chance, and what's more; he has chaotic power over reality. His goofy attitude makes him an easy target of distrust from a few students, especially the callous, stubborn, and strict candidate for student body president: Starlight Glimmer.
I could've chosen a better story image, but I couldn't find anything for a young Discord. Besides, this image symbolizes a certain element in the story.
YEAH-wait what?
IM LOVIN IT
good job keep going don't slow down keep dem chapters comin
5926301
I'll go as fast as I can. Thanks.
Here's a writing tip: Every time a new person speaks, make a new paragraph.
5931906
I did.
5931935 I meant this:
"Bleh" [pony] said.
"Bleh bleh" [different pony] replied.
Notice the space between the sentences.
5931967
I know what he's talking about. It's just that I don't know where he thinks I need to space at.
Yeaaaaa new chapter I'm highly impressed cus I lov it
Keep them coming. Quick question, is this going to be a "new chapter everyday" kind of thing? Not that I mind, I'm just curious.
5941036
Not always. It might be a few days in between a few,
5941260 Sounds Fine
As I was reading this I had my song on shuffle and as I hit thier song it hit helping twi win the crown. :p just a funny coiquidink
Still awesome as awlwas
Yay I'm happy ur popping out chapters so fast and I still luv it
Uh oh.
spotted The Emperor New Groove in there...
"Principle" I think you mean "Principal" The former is a moral rule or belief.
Already can't wait. And this?
I'm having the strangest case of Deja Mustard right now.
This is reminding me of some of those old movies going down the same route (but I'm not sure which ones) it just has that feel to it
You should of had the bands playing something as he walked out of the school
I hope that what ever Ricky's found will kick Starlight's big fat butt off that throne she's gotten
discord
:D
I would of thought that the kids would do some sort of rebellion type thing like they always use to do in 'Recess' ...
(loved the joke about the phone vibrating )
uh oh...
5966226 I sadly have to agree my friend.
5966771 i'm talking about Devastator and Starlight.
5966870 I know
Whew. For a second there i thought Devastator was gonna go Ultron and go on about no strings on him
5969990
Well, I'd never put that there. I don't want to put too much detail at once. Anyway, what do you think about Starlight's evil plan?
5970004 incredibly lame and easily stoppable. by the way do you mind if i use this universe too for my fic? I'll explain it more in the PM.
5970071
Hey, I'd like to see you come up with a human Starlight plan. It gets difficult sometimes. I'm lucky I came up with this.
5970105 not saying it's bad it's a good effort
5970127
Yeah, you're probably right. In the original movie, Sunset tried to take over Equestria with an army of teenagers! I'll give you a thumbs-up on your opinion.
5970146 ok.
um...aren't school and after school programs mandated by the school board, not a single principal or student body president? Glimmer seems to have an awful lot of power here.
Discord for President! *pins badge on shirt*
5970239
You know how influential Glimmer is.
Pins moving and talking discord for president badge to shirt.
I enjoy the concept of the story, but some sentences are phrased a little oddly, and it throws me off. Basically, I think you could use an editor to proof-read and revise the sentences, so the flow feels a bit more natural. If you'd like, I could be your editor, but if you find someone else, that's okay, too. I'd try my best, but I need to warn you; I think I occasionally overuse commas.
Nevermind. I am now caught up in the story, and I think your writing has improved even over just a couple of chapters. You don't really need an editor that much, but I just kind of wanted to bring up the possibility. I hope you aren't offended by my suggestion.
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It's all right. I'm training in proper grammar writing to become an official author for short stories.
NO ONLY 1 MORE CHAPTER U CABT DO DIS
I have loved dis book from the first chapter so much please don't end it here and when I say here I mean there
SEQUAL SEQUAL ENCORE ENCORE. MISCHIEVOUS BONUS CHAPTERS ANYTHING
ha ha. justice has been served like a fancy dinner
Will we be seeing a sequel in the near future that has pony twilight?
iz gud
Did you have to ask? to infinity plus one
I'd like to see one to see how the girls (and Flash) treat EG Twilight
SEQUAL:
U made me do dis
SO many
MUSTACHES
5973640 to infinity to the infinityth power
That's right SUPER INFINITY
:
5974062
Well, since you loved my story the most obviously, I have to ask this question I never get the chance to ask those who read my stories: what's your favorite part?