(short)Chapter 10, Dream
I was.... I don't know. I don't know where I am! I don't know where I am! I put my head in my hands, I was scared. I looked up when a loud rumbling sound began to fill the air. There was a large cloud of fog and darkness rushing towards me. I got up and ran away from it. I started to scream,
"HELP ME! HELP ME!" I called out to the vast emptiness, but no one answered. I tripped and fell, back towards the darkness, and it consumed me.
It eventually hit the ground, in the belly of the darkness. There, waiting for me, was Echo. She grinned evilly when she saw me.
"You're blowing it out there," Echo said to me, she stroked the side of my face. "But it's ok, I'm here to help you." I saw her bat fangs and was scared again.
"NO!" I screamed.
"But why fight it?" Echo asked. "Your old and out-dated. We aren't human any more, so Diana, you are no longer needed. Why don't you sleep? It'll be much easier that way."
"Not needed?" I shook my head. I began to feel weary and tired.
"I know you're tired, so give up. There's no need for Diana any more, she's dead." Echo soothed me.
"Dead?" I asked. Echo Nodded. I felt myself slipping, shrinking, vanishing.
"Yes, dead. Diana is dead."Echo said. She was right... there was no need for Diana any more. And so, I let Echo take over.So then, Echo flew away, back to the wakeing world, leaving Diana behind.
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dark much?
also terrifying.
Hmm... Split personality, eh? So, by the law that history likes to repeat itself, I conclude a battle of persona's will occur in the future of this story. And during that battle 'Diana' and 'Echo' will split into separate entities and separate bodies; and then near the end of the story, the two will have a brutal battle forcing one or the other to the brink of death, only to be saved by Dusk, *cough* Flash Sentry *cough*, bringing in a moral dilemma of whether or not you should kill off a sentient being even though it may have been a byproduct of yourself. Which means, this story will end in two ways, either it will be a reluctant mercy ending where this 'Echo' learns humility and accepts the idea that 'Diana' and 'Echo' are one in the same, but just lives in different worlds and 'Diana' will make semi-regular visits to them. Or, it will be the bitter sweet ending, where 'Diana' will execute 'Echo' in a merciless fashion causing a dark and questionable ending bringing up deep philosophical issues to mind questioning some part of our mundane existence and leaving 'Diana' with a empty feeling of loss knowing that she has killed a part of herself.
Don't worry, I'm good at these things. I know exactly what the author is planning.
6003181
That's what is called foreshadowing via nightmare.
6004012
good inference, but the story is going to end nowhere NEAR that way. But... the idea is good though. I'll have to remebere that.
6004372 I was kind of hoping to get the 'this guy is getting way too overly complicated and looking way too into this one chapter' response; it would have been funnier to me that way. But I guess giving out new ideas to try isn't so bad either...
. . . Why am i thinking of naruto right now... (not because I was watching it yesterday or anything...)
6004012
Personally I think Diana is going to hunt Echo and a passing Luna will find out.
6006541 Aah, the simple answers always ruin the fun and over-the-top responses that end with conspiracy theories. lol
P.S. Luna best princess....
6005726
What? I'm not a timelord... that would be impossible! 
Heh heh... Nope! No, "time traveling dimension hoppers" here! I defeinitely don't have a specially modified TARDIS that travels time, space, AND dimensions... That would be crazy! 
6007068 again: not difeinatly, its spelled definitely.
6006848
Yes Luna best princess.
6008117 Love the profile picture; where did you find it?
My reaction to this chapter
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If only this story was as entertaining as that show.
6009380
Are you seriously trying to compare me to Gravity Falls? That show was INCREDIBLY made (not to mention, is a TV show)! It can hide have messages, clever visual gags, as well as better humor than the text medium (not to mention a kick a** intro). There's a reason the term "show business" and not "book business."
Also that show is freaking amazing, don't put me to it's standards! You will allways be disappointed if you put something to Gravity Falls standards.
6011120
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6011120 Agreed. This story doesn't even have grappling hooks.
6013897... Is that a Disney reference I spy?
Also, fast pacing! Let's go with that!
6007068 Enough with the excuses. You let out WAY too much foreshadowing for any other explanation... you know what that is right?
Well thats better than having too much headcannon knowledge that you let out a character or two into the comment sections... sometimes right?
Nope!
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Shut up Engi
6007068
TARDIS that travels time, space, AND dimensions.
F*** YOU THAT WAS MY IDEA!!!
6413127
Technically, that's moffat's idea. Timelords COULD travel dimensions.