• Published 22nd May 2015
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The Celestial Lie - Twisted Colors



Hi, my name is Nick, or it used to be, most call me [i]The Reaper[/i] now. I like it, but it wasn't my choice. Make one quote at the wrong time and you get a new name, who knew.

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Update please?:pinkiesad2:

is the next chapter in the making still :pinkiesmile:

I suspect you have abandoned this story at this point, despite not even getting to the part where you explain this stories uniqueness.

6670829 I have not abandoned either of my stories but I am highly unmotivated unfortunately so updates will be spread out quite a bit, I do apologise for the wait. :fluttershysad:

I believe Nick is super edgy because only the most edgiest people come up the names: "The Reaper"

Good story though

7394784 hehe the story description actually says that his name wasn't his choice but I think that's all I'll say about his name until it comes up in the story :rainbowwild: and thanks for reading what's there even though I haven't updated in a really long time.

In the description alone i can see that you used one of the 3 main displaced cliches 'displaced cliche 2' main character ends up in stone for some reason. There is a bigger one, having these people sent to equestria, but that's not a problem, that's the whole point of these

Other than the cliche, it's good so far. Am i right in assuming that this is overwatch reaper? If so, reapositioning!!!

7555276 Nope, :derpytongue2: He is a reaper like a grim reaper.

7555623 ok, but when reading and visualizing the story, he will be overwatch reaper for me

dude :pinkiecrazy: when is the next update :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

It's as dead as the smell of dead carcasses.

can we have the next chapter now please :pinkiehappy: *twitch,twitch* :pinkiecrazy: hehehe

It's dead and you killed it

where is the UPDATE!!!!!! :flutterrage:

And then there was nothing for three years.

Hamlet is proud of this, hamlet shall have some cheese for dinner 🐭

will this ever be continued?

It's only now that I've noticed that I never put a full stop at the end of the chapter, woops. :derpytongue2: That will be corrected soon.

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