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Rarity wakes up one morning--far too early for her liking--and finds she has a lovely new set of pearly-white wings on her back!

What does this mean? Has something become of the Princesses? Will Twilight know what to do? For that matter, how will the newly-made princess feel when one of her friends becomes an alicorn, as well?

Raricorn/Twilight shipping. All cast will be involved. Some sad to come, this is a ship fic, so be aware of...feelings and such.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 30 )

Hey wada you know first viewer, liker, commenter and favouriter what d' ya know!:rainbowlaugh:

Sounds interesting... keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

Ponyville was quiet, the sun had not yet breached the horizon, but was lingering on the edge of the horizon, the moon at about an equal position on the opposite horizon

That's a lot of horizons!
At least the middle one could do with changing to 'but was lingering on its edge'

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Good catch! I try to avoid excessive repetition like that, so I fixed it. :) Thanks! New chapter soon! :D

But right when she took one step up the stairs a rather forceful and impending knocking came from the door. As if to add to the mare's morning discomfort and soreness, there was a sudden loud, obnoxious knocking that boomed from the main door, causing her to wince with every pound.

Do we need both sentences? Surely the second one on its own is good enough.
Good opening, will definitely be sticking around for this one :twilightsmile:

And in an unexpected twist, the first pony they come across is Big Macintosh - who now has wings and a horn.
He is most upset when he finds out that wings and a horn do mean that he is now a Princess.

So, since it has the sad tag, not tragedy, can I hope for a happy ending?

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Yes, you can, though it'll be awhile! :twilightsheepish:

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LOL Yes, definitely. EVERYONE IS NOW ALICORNS! ALL THE PONIES IN EQUESTRIA. NO ONE IS UNIQUE. :rainbowlaugh:

5942745 This is more than acceptable. Thanks.

Luna, Celestia, or royal guards.

5945729 Or all three, perchance?


But in another light, this is good!

You just lost me here with the sisters dying. bye.

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Aw! Well, I'm sorry to hear that. But...Only Celestia is dead, if you had read...

6025932 the way it's done. just no. Cry for Eternity did that concept better.

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I appreciate your opinion. :) Again, this was just a little RP between friends that I'm just sharing, no need for any hostility~ :twilightsmile:

6026198 It's just thought it go elsewhere so dissapointed in that. That's my view. in the end it's your story.

Please continue the story, I am really like what you are doing with it. I really need to know what happens next.

:moustache: Twilight Rarity ? I'm here to help I'm not a humdrum!
:raritystarry: I have wings!?!
:twilightoops: Nightmare Moon!
:raritydespair: Useless?
:moustache: Don't think so. . .
:ajsmug: Why did I ever come to this shindig?
:rainbowlaugh: Spike still has no wings!
:flutterrage: Wut? Angel Bunny has no wings!
:trollestia: Spike kill it with fire!

Could of been better it sorta had an idea that fizzled out:facehoof:

The element of generosity everyone! That's the Rarity that I like to see in fan fics. I love the idea that transferring the wings and the horn from one to another would make the recipient's wings and horn have a small bit of color from the original bearer. That's really ingenious! It makes you wonder if that's why Cadence's wings are like that. Hmmm...headcanon accepted.

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He's mentioned. He stays with the five.

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Ye ask and ye shall receive! :trollestia:

I would like to ask for more, please.

Will this ever be updated?

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