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The Derpy Doctor


"There has to be evil so that good can prove its purity above it." — Gautama Buddha

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You are a pony that experiences the love and trust of having somepony to love. A mare, having been torn apart from the hurt of heartbreak, comes to you in need of somepony to love I wanted to make a note that in this series, you will take many different forms: earth pony, pegasi. Each chapter is based on the premise that the last chapter didn’t happen and the next chapter won’t happen. So, each story is completely unreliant on any other stories. This series is based on the internet meme: doing hurtful things to your waifu. Each chapter is based on the assumption that that character has already undergone, her own “doing hurtful things to your waifu chart” and has had each of those items already happened to her. So, in these stories, you will be the pony to make her feel better. You are the protagonist. You’ll make her feel better. With that having been said, enjoy.
“No man stands so tall as when he stoops to help a child,”
-Abraham Lincoln.
for my purposes, I’m replacing the word ‘child’ with ‘mare.’

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 62 )

You have something adorable.:derpytongue2:

5919789 Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it.:rainbowkiss:

i LOVED that last part!!! :yay:

An a-dorable exit! Nicely executed!

If I could upvote this story for both chapters I would.

Consider this upvote #2 from me.

Keep up the good work.


~ftLoA

Okay, everyone, I started writing the next chapter for this, I found that they way that I'm writing this is 100% arbitrary. So, to prevent confusion and maximise your enjoyment, I'm asking you, the readers, to vote on what mare you want me to do next. I say mare, because I can't relate the other way, so if you would please vote, I would appreciate that.:pinkiesmile: I'm going write based on the number of votes then by a first come first-serve basis to make it fair. Thank you.

I'd like to see a lyra fic :derpytongue2: keep it up, enjoying very much ^^

5984731 You got it!:raritywink: This next on will be published really soon. I have a lot of time right now to right it.

5984908 that was really quick xD loved it, can't wait for the next story :twilightsmile:

I can't wait to see what's the next story this is good.

“Someone?” you ask.

“Yes,” Lyra confirmed, “a human,”

:rainbowhuh: Am I missing something here?


(btw) Are you going to write one for each of the character tags you've listed as well as requests?

5993262 Yes, Lyra ia big fan of humans. In many fanfictions, she dreams about them. That is why I wrote the story this way. I thought it would help to settle the air of this fic, make it seem more innocent. Does that help? Did I misunderstand the question?

5993262 I am taking requests, but so far I've recieved two requests outside of this website to one of Luna, so I'm doing her once I get done the chapter I'm doing now. You can make a request for whomever I do after that, this is my week to work on this fanfic rather than the other one I'm doing (which will be applied to the website all at once in about two, three weeks... or a month). So, yeah go ahead and recommend something and if I can't finish what I'm doing now, your request and Luna, it'll all be done by the week after next.

And later that week, the poor guy found himself turned into a human by Lyra's magic.

5993700 That's not so bad. It's funny (LQTM), but it's not so bad. :trollestia:

5993700 :rainbowlaugh:


5993503 She wants a human, but will settle for a unicorn instead?

5993786 I'm saying the experience of having the pony there changed her mind. Even though she wanted something different, the matter of fact that he was there for her at that time made her decide to love some pony a lot different. The perfect stallion is not perfect stallion without faults. It's what happens when you love someone even for the things that you previously think is wrong with them, but find it perfect with the person you happen to love. It's the flaws that make the special someone perfect.

5997331 uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum. Thanks? I... I don't exactly get what that means, but I'll take as a compliment. Go team!

Hm..might I suggest one-or more-of the following for a future installment:

Carrot Top
Jinx/Tough Break (the mare in the wheelchair)
Colgate/Minuette
Raven(Celestia's assistant in the comics)
Trixie
Zecora

6000855 Okay, I'll work on these as much as possible as soon as I am done with my current chapter.

I say that Nightmare Moon should get one

Another success ^^ how about aloe and lotus?

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Each of your comments will be added into a long line of suggestions, but I promise I will eventually get to them.

6000855 Considered and written down for later chapter's. All Of The Above: Coming Soon.

Hard Workers on writing is what I like to see and you just proved it. I'm still amaze you still wrote it. It might be on edgy but it's still good. I like how the tears and cries as her first tear as Trixie tore her through her wounded eye and hurt her that is poetry. More like sad poetry but still it caught my eye.

This deserves to be a comic.

Rarity next, please.

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Of course I jumped to Luna first since well, Luna fan. And now I am outraged. Why the fuck would Luna suddenly love someone for no reason, why would that guard (I refuse to call it"me") suddenly also like Luna. Though the latter is quite understandable, just can't help be angry at Luna being so OOC.

6014893 Firstly, "Language!" secondly, your answer lies in the fact that you skipped to that chapter, buddy. If you would have read the chapter thoroughly, you'd have found that "you" know her quite personally as a guard beforehoof. Now, frankly if you're going to continue the rude hate, I will not respond. Rather I'll just delete your comment. I don't usually read this. It's spam. Are you done? 'cause that was rude, especially when I took the time to write it and the first thing you do after skipping the majority of my hard work is to curse at me. What did I do?:fluttercry:

6014976 If Luna was in fact OOC (I have NOT read the chapter in question) then it's probably just constructive criticism. Yes they could have said it more politely, but...

6020521 It doesn't matter, the question was fully explained. I've clarified the chapter, so he/she understands what I wrote. What exactly does OOC mean? Over Original Character? Anyway, I don't really want the curse words in my comments... So, it still was quite rude. I really don't know what to tell the guy when he/she strait up ignored all of the other chapters and instead decided to curse at me. Instead he/she could have built an understanding of how it actually works. Is that understandable?

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What exactly does OOC mean?

out of character

I really don't know what to tell the guy when he/she strait up ignored all of the other chapters ...

It might help avoid future issues if you put the (author's notes) in the story description as well. Just a suggestion.

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Sorry if I seemed rash there, It just seems rude, though

That was certainly sweet. I know I would give her a hand:twilightsmile:

Another success :twilightsmile: can't wait for the next one

This is exciting. I can't wait for more.

So cute :pinkiehappy: This is short but it's still good.

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