It was going to be a long day. I was tired and irritable due to not being able to sleep much after reading the report that somepony had casually slipped under my door. The same report that had become something of an obsession for me.
This was far different than what the intelligence section had been feeding me in both detail and delivery. Nothing previous had been shared anywhere but in their secured facility. Everything I had was hoofwritten from memory.
The other eye opener was that this was a recent report, not one carefully delayed for my consumption. If I were to guess, in the normal course of business, I wouldn’t be receiving this data for at least another week or two.
What struck me the most, however, was that nothing was redacted. The report was fully intact with a level of detail I couldn’t have previously dreamed of. This was the real thing. How or why it had come to me was a mystery, but it was definitely appreciated.
My relationship with Sergeant Major Granite was excellent, but not so much that he’d take this kind of career risk for me. At least… I didn’t think so. I also couldn’t just ask him about it. What an awkward—
“Sir!” Miley Hooves shouted as she burst through my doorway without knocking.
It wasn't unusual for Miley to forego proper door procedure, but she looked genuinely panicked. “What’s happened?”
She pointed a hoof in the general direction of outside. “We’re under attack!”
“Under attack?” I repeated in surprise as adrenaline started to kick in. “Form up in the princess’s chambers, send a runner to summon every other guard. Go immediately.”
Miley quickly saluted and rushed off, leaving my door open. I spared just a moment to throw the report in my bottom desk drawer before galloping out into the hall. There were palace guards scrambling everywhere, and many of them were looking out the windows instead of going to their posts. I had no idea where their officers were, but I had a job to do.
The doors to the princess’s chambers were open but still guarded. My house guards, at least, were professional enough to mind their duty. They stood to attention as I hurried through. The princess was out on the balcony with Radiant Orchid and I joined them.
“You’ve got to be kidding me,” I said as I surveyed Canterlot. The situation was clearly serious, but I was having a hard time accepting the threat.
The city was under attack, but not by changelings, gryphons, or any aggressor I'd expect. No, we were being assaulted by giant cockatrices.
Princess Luna looked down at me. “They are reacting to a fast-moving celestial body of extreme evocational significance.”
“What?”
Radiant Orchid clarified, “A big comet is giving them superpowers.”
That made more sense. “I see. So we’re dealing with extreme magic here?”
“Verily,” the princess replied.
My house guards were starting to arrive, filling the room. As they crowded into the princess’s chambers, they got into line and stood at attention. Their eyes were flicking towards the windows, but that was forgivable.
“Alright, we should get the princess inside and down into the basement,” I ordered. “They’re still at the outskirts of the city, so we should have plenty of time.”
“Not this time, Silent Knight,” Princess Luna said with a toss of her mane. “Our city is under attack. Celestia has joined the battle and so shall we! There will be no hiding this day.”
I gawked at her. As every reason why she should do the exact opposite jumped to the forefront of my mind, she met my eyes with an intense determination.
“I will not hear otherwise,” she commanded in a voice that was just shy of the Royal Canterlot Voice.
It was still enough to make me drop into a bow. “Alright, I can accept this request as long as you agree to some rules.”
“I will, but first, my armor, please!” she called as she swept past Orchid and me.
I followed along behind her. After the trip to Nordanver, Princess Luna had commissioned a suit of armor for herself. I think it was part of the way she dealt with the horror she had seen. It was also reasonable for her to have her own protection.
Protection was an understatement when it came to this suit, however. It was a masterpiece far beyond even mine. The finest smiths in all of Equestria had forged it for her and the brightest alchemist had strengthened it. Until now, it had merely sat on a stand in the back of her chambers. Today was the day that would change.
The aesthetic for Princess Luna’s armor had been designed to match ours, with polished plates of dark and light purple hues—byzantium and heliotrope, as I recall. Her hoofguards extended further up her legs than ours, and there were little flourishes that had no protective value but looked nice. With her size and regal stature, she cut quite an imposing figure when she wore it.
“Iridescence, help the princess with her armor,” I ordered.
She nodded. “Yes, sir. Princess, if you’ll follow me.”
While the two of them tended to that task, I turned to face my section. They looked ready for the opportunity to get back into combat. What were giant cockatrices compared to a changeling attack or gryphon ambush?
“Listen up, ponies. Today is going to be a little different than usual. We have an opportunity to play offense. We’re going to help the city guard push these magic-fueled monstrosities out of Canterlot. At the same time, we are going to be careful as we do it. Our number one priority is to protect the princess. Don’t forget that fact for an instant.”
When Princess Luna returned fully dressed in her armor, my attention shifted to her. “The rules are as follows: you will remain with Iridescence and her squad at all times. You will not charge off on your own. You will not overextend. If things get too dangerous, we will drag you out of the streets and into the basement, kicking and screaming if we have to. Am I being clear?”
She blinked a few times at me. I think she sometimes forgot that I was more than just her royal guard. I was also her friend who wasn't afraid to speak to her like that. It was necessary so that she understood the gravity of this situation.
"Yes," she finally said with a nod.
I nodded back and turned to the unit. “Sergeant Iridescence, as you might have already guessed, you’re with the princess. Diamond formation. No pony gets further than two meters away from her.”
“Yes, sir,” she replied.
“Sergeant Hooves, I want a wide external perimeter around Alpha Squad. If they’re out of sight, collapse in. Try not to let anything get through.”
“Understood, boss.”
“Sergeant Stone, you’re with me. We’re going to be the vanguard. I’ve got an idea that I think just might work on our giant friends.”
“I like the sound of that,” he replied.
With a motion towards the door, I ordered, “Alright, everypony, move out. Let’s keep to an orderly fashion. Look fearless, angry, and professional. The palace guard might need some inspiration.”
Without a moment’s hesitation, all of the ponies fell in and started marching out the door. Radiant Orchid lingered back. When the last tail went through the door, she leaned in and whispered, “You didn’t assign me anywhere. I know we discussed this, but that looked pretty bad.”
“Not my reasoning,” I replied. “I want you on Princess Luna’s flank. If she stops following the rules, subdue her and get her out. I’ll be up front, so it falls on you.”
“Subdue the princess?” she asked incredulously.
“You heard me. If you have to, jump on her back, grab her mane, and ride her into the basement, you do that. You’re the only pony I trust to follow that order.”
Radiant Orchid nodded and turned towards the door. “I think I liked you better when I thought you were a screw-up.”
“I’m sorry to disappoint you,” I replied as I trotted quickly beside her.
The palace guard was starting to get organized when we marched through the hallways. Many of the ponies stopped and moved out of the way as my column went by. If any of the House Guard were frightened, they didn’t show it and our air of confidence was infectious.
By the time we reached the courtyard, there were several other officers marshalling their guards for the defense.
“Keep together!” Orchid called sternly as we approached the gate. It had been closed per our standard procedures.
Without missing a beat, I called, “Make way for the princess! Open the gate!”
The guards in the gatehouse didn’t seem to question that order and did as commanded. The drawbridge fell, the portcullis went up, and we marched out into the city proper.
Canterlot was in total chaos, which wasn’t a surprise. Being invaded by giant monsters isn’t a day-to-day occurrence. Most ponies had the good sense to stay indoors, but that didn’t mean there weren’t still some that had been trapped on the streets, uncertain of where to go.
“Silent Knight, on your left!” the princess called. “Be careful, ponies; do not look them in the eyes!”
Quickly, I turned and spotted one of the cockatrices lumbering our way. “Fan out! Stick to the plan! Mountain Stone, with me!”
The House Guard broke into formation exactly as ordered, and I galloped with Charlie Squad towards the beast.
“Keep clear of the legs,” I called before rearing back and pummeling the cockatrice’s lower belly with my forehooves.
Or, well, I tried. Admitting my attack was wholly ineffective isn’t something a royal guard would normally do, but I’m confident the thing laughed at me.
The cockatrice moved far faster than something its size should as it leaned over to peck at me with its huge beak. I leapt into the air to avoid the attack and, while its head was low, Mountain Stone whipped around and landed a ferocious buck right against the cockatrice’s temple.
The overgrown chicken staggered like a drunk and fell over. As best I could tell, it was out cold.
Mountain Stone snorted and trotted past the unconscious heap of feathers and scales. “What’s next?”
“I think we should scare up another target and lead it back to the princess,” I replied. “Her magic will probably pack a big wallop.”
The sergeant nodded and looked to his squad. “Stay close.”
We pressed on further down the street and were caught off guard when two more of the giant fowls appeared from behind a tavern. They squawked and started to charge towards us.
“Fall back!” I called, doing my best to keep my tone firm and full of confidence.
We all galloped towards where the rest of the House Guard had set up their perimeter. As the distance between us and them evaporated I ordered, “Drop!”
The ten of us dropped flat to the cobblestone as one of the two birds behind us was struck by a powerful burst of alicorn magic. It went reeling and collapsed against a nearby building.
The other was pelted with a hail of crossbow bolts. They didn’t cause much in the way of damage, but I guessed being stung by half a dozen bees at once wouldn’t go unnoticed. The effect certainly forced the cockatrice to pause. That hesitation was long enough to allow Princess Luna to power back up and knock the creature out cold with another burst.
“Huzzah! Find us another, Silent Knight!”
“Aye, Princess!” I responded before taking to the air to survey the battle. Civilian ponies were scrambling everywhere. Units of city guards were moving through the streets doing their best to get them out of harm's way while simultaneously driving the creatures back.
They were doing the first task very well. The latter was lacking, but city guards weren’t equipped to face giant magical creatures. That was all the more evident when I saw an extra-large cockatrice approaching a small squad of guards one street over. At least three of them looked injured.
“Mountain Stone! One street north. A real big one! Meet me there and hurry! We have sisters in danger,” I ordered.
“Yes, sir,” he called as his squad took off at a gallop.
I circled the cockatrice once to get at its back before diving straight at it. There was little chance I’d be able to stop it on my own, but I wanted to distract it from the injured ponies. The big beast staggered when I slammed into its back, knocking most of the wind out of me. I fell onto the street, landing heavily in my armor.
My goal had been to get its attention, but what I’d done was make it angry. I scrambled as I tried to get back on my hooves while desperately trying to catch my breath. All I could really do was scoot back. At least the guards were now safe.
The beast had found its footing and turned to stomp towards me. When its foot rose, several ponies sounded off with war cries and came galloping out of a side alley.
Mountain Stone and his squad arrived just in time. They smashed the cockatrice’s other leg with a series of bucks and shoulder checks and sent it sprawling.
Battle Ready and Astral Bolt helped me up and we started moving away. I coughed a few times before finding my voice. “Fall back! Lead it to the others.”
As fast as we could, we headed down the alley. The extra-large cockatrice had already recovered and was gaining on us. In a fit of rage, it smashed its way down the narrow passage, doing extreme damage to the two buildings that framed it.
“Incoming!” I heard Miley shout as we fanned out once we’d cleared the alley.
All of the guards lifted their crossbows and I could see Princess Luna’s horn illuminating.
“Drop!” I called.
A hail of bolts flew over our heads and hit the charging cockatrice. All were ineffective… the thing just kept coming. Somehow it even anticipated the princess’s attack and ducked the magical bolt. It barreled forwards and smashed into Miley’s perimeter, knocking three ponies aside like ragdolls.
Ironclad shouted, “Medic!”
The cry sent fear through me. I saw Starry, Lavender, and Risky lying there, and a gryphon rapidly closing the distance between it and… “Princess!” I shouted in warning, my blood running cold.
There was just too much momentum behind the beast for anypony to have a chance to stop it. Firn Bristle threw herself in front of it, bracing herself for a blow that never came. The cockatrice instead slammed into a glowing royal blue shield.
Iridescence stood defiantly at the princess’s side, her horn burning brightly to project the spell. Her magic gave out almost immediately, but it had been enough. The force had been stopped.
A moment later, Princess Luna’s horn erupted in black fire and a beam of light exploded into the creature. In an instant, the cockatrice was off its feet and sailing away. Not just away from us, but away from the city.
Everything went silent for a moment as I got up and looked around. I was in Canterlot, I kept reminding myself. Not Nordanver. “Report! How are the wounded?”
Oopsie Daisy called back, “Three down here. A few broken bones, but stable.”
“All minor here, sir!” Nova shouted.
“Good here, sir,” Golden Touch said off to my right. Somehow the creature had missed trampling the ponies that were lying on the ground.
I nodded. Sweat was clinging to my coat, and not just from the exertion. “Alright, Iridescence, have two of your ponies help the wounded to the palace. Mountain, pick three to fill in for the perimeter. Everypony take a quick breather and keep a sharp eye out. We’ll get started again in a moment.”
My orders were being carried out, and Orchid walked up to offer me her canteen. “They look silly but they’re no joke,” she said softly.
After taking a quick drink, I shook my head. “No. I guess they’re not.”
“You’re doing fine. Although, with all due respect, sir, be sure not to lead from too far up front. If you go down it will demoralize the section. Sometimes you need to know when to let others take the risks.”
I glanced at her and paused to mull over her words. It seemed like my job to lead by example, but when she put it like that, she had a good point. Finally, I nodded. “You’re right, First Sergeant.”
She gave me a pleased look, then steeled her expression and turned away. “Alright, ponies, let’s not get too comfortable. We don’t know how long we have until the next encounter. Lightning Flash, Thunder Tumble, get up there and spot for us. I want to know if any of those things gets within a block of this position.”
“Yes, ma’am!” they replied before flying up.
I took my own advice and caught my breath. When I felt less winded, I flew up after Lighting and Tumble to get another good look at the city. The battle was still raging on. There were cockatrices and royal guards everywhere fighting it out in small skirmishes. That was when it dawned on me that this wouldn’t be a quick fight.
Far to the west, the sun was just starting its descent towards the horizon. The cover of night might be turned to our advantage, but I wasn’t certain the cockatrices would be impacted.
My attention shifted a few streets over when the distant sounds of screams reached my ears. A single royal guard was galloping with a herd of colts and fillies. Two cockatrices were chasing them and shortening the distance to their prey quickly.
“We need to move immediately!” I shouted down to the others. “There are foals in danger!”
With a mighty flap of her wings, Princess Luna left her escort and joined me in the sky. She followed my gaze and immediately took off in the direction of the young ponies.
“Princess, wait!” I called after her before cursing under my breath. “Sergeant Orchid, follow us as best you can. Pegasi, with me!”
The momentary lull in the action was now shattered, and everypony that could fly took to the sky with me as we chased after the princess. Down below, I could hear Orchid screaming orders to try and keep the galloping ponies in some form of order.
We closed the distance quickly. It took everything I had just to keep close to Princess Luna. When we drew near our foes, her horn lit up and another great lance of magical energy leapt forth and struck the lead cockatrice.
“Get the foals!” I shouted to the other pegasi and they dove towards the street.
I similarly turned my attention to the little ponies, trusting that, in this one moment, Princess Luna would be safe.
With precision and care, each guard swooped down and scooped up a foal or two, spiriting them towards our unit. The second cockatrice was gaining on the remaining pony, the lone guard who’d tried to help the young escape. I could see Princess Luna was still powering up and didn’t want to take the risk of her missing.
My course took me straight to the guard and I wrapped both forelegs around their middle. I pumped my wings as hard as I could, doing my best to lift us both from the cobblestone street while she squealed in surprise.
It was slow going, since carrying a pony while flying in armor is a challenge. Carrying a royal guard who was also in armor is near impossible, even for a stallion of my size. Luck was on my side, however, as this particular guard was smaller than normal.
When my strength gave out, we came to a crash landing in one of the city’s many green spaces. We were lucky, however, as the cockatrice was far away and likely on the receiving end of Princess Luna’s wrath.
“Are you okay?” I asked.
The little blue guard squirmed out from under me and gasped. She was trembling all over, so much so that her armor rattled. “I think so. Are the foals okay?”
“Yeah, we got them all.”
“Good.” She flopped over into the grass, seeming content to just lay there. It dawned on me then: I knew this particular guard.
“Warrant Officer Azurite?”
She looked over my way and just nodded.
“What are you doing out here? You’re a pony resources specialist!”
Her eyes went wide and she looked almost… offended. “The city is under attack! Do you think I could live with myself if I just stayed in my office and hid?”
I got up and brushed myself off before offering her a hoof. “I wouldn’t have lost any respect for you if you had… but in all honesty, you’ve earned a lot more of it now.”
Azurite took my hoof and pulled herself up. She was still trembling all over, but that didn’t bother me. Smart ponies get afraid. Fear is good. Fear keeps us alive.
“Come on, we need to get back to my unit. Brave or not, you shouldn’t be out here alone.”
“Yes, sir,” she replied softly and we headed back the way we’d came.
Radiant Orchid had reformed the perimeter and was standing with the princess. The two cockatrices were nowhere to be seen.
“Report,” I called.
“All foals accounted for, the princess is unharmed, minor wounds only, sir.”
“Good. Oopsie Daisy, Ironclad, and Starlit Veil, I am temporarily assigning you to Warrant Officer Azurite.” I shifted to look at the little blue mare. “Take the foals and go to the palace. I want you to get them down to one of the central rooms in the basement and protect them.”
She looked up at me and nodded. “Yes, sir. Alright everypony, let’s get moving. Stay together, little ones.”
While we watched them go, I caught a look from Radiant Orchid. She was eyeing the foals with a worried furrow of her brow. It was the look of a mother who suddenly realized the same could be happening to her own offspring.
I knew what she was thinking, and I didn’t blame her. We had a duty to the princess, however, so I shook my head no. Her eyes closed briefly and then, just like that, the expression was gone, replaced by the look of a hard and determined House Guard sergeant.
"Oopsie Daisy" still makes me laugh.
Fun chapter, though I do wonder how a group of giant cockatrices could get that close to the city so fast. Unless they were already nearby... Eh, don't mind me, just thinking.
Oooo an interesting chapter. I love it! its nice to see Azurite again and willing to stand up and fight. She just quickly became my favorite supporting character along with Runic. Im curious to see how Runic is holding up with these over sized Cockatrices. A good chapter!
6016594 Or maybe released by certain gryphons who may have a grudge against ponies due to a failed attack they made? Who knows eh?
Oh...! I was wondering. Alrighty then, carry on.
Oh yeah, a big battle chapters!
Huzzah for Luna and Azurite!
6016594 6016605 My thinking, based on the comic book, is that they were normal sized and lived local. The comet grew them and, like most giant monsters, thought "hey there is a city! Lets go there!"
6016601 I <3 Azurite. She had to have a part!
6016613 Yeah it is a side story of the first two comics I believe.
6016627 Ah ok. I never read the comics personally so this is abit new to me. And yes Azurite is awesome. Anyway cant wait for Part 2. I hope Radiant Orchid's foals are ok after all this.
Well it ain't mine...
Edit: Aaaaaaand it was edited while I was reading, good for you
6016627 That would make sense. Figured that it would have to be something like that, rather than them just sort of slithering up from afar and no one noticing them.
Also, Azu during a battle? I feel like the general reaction of an enemy would almost be "D'awww—ACK!"
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I'm now disappointed that Silent didn't come upon a terrified Azu, frozen and shaking in the middle of a street, with a giant cockatrice placidly crouched down and coo-ing over the adorable little filly playing guard.
"Sir? Orders?"
"I... Don't know. If we attack it or move her, it may go hostile. But as adorable as this is, we can't just leave her there. Can we?"
"Ummmm..."
"The hay with it... Azurite! Keep up the good work!"
"Eep!"
"Coooooo..." (So adorable...)
Sometime later, after the crisis is over, we find out that Azurite has a loyal new "pet" to keep Mr. Clockerson company.
Nice chapter. My favorite diminutive blue unicorn makes an appearance
One little thing though....
I think you meant change :)
6016729 Oh, lord, what have I started?
6016627 A side story from the first four comics, but yes.
6016645 I actually really like the comics in general. They can be hit or miss but there is a lot of things spread throughout them that are great. The artists do a ton of background gags.
6016654 I am swift like ninja.
6016662 If it was Azurite's story it may have gone that way ;D
6016729 ^ ;D
6016735 Ah yes, the dreaded c to g.
6016752 My mistake. The first four then.
:3 I love this chapter. Filled with action and seriousness, yet silly all the same. :3
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I foresee demands of a side-shot in your future...
Or tacos. Tacos or side-shot. One of the two.
I thought at first that the "attack" was just a ploy to get Silent to an
interventionparty or something to make him to loosen up and drop the obsessive manner he's adopted. I was wrong.Also, forgive me if this came up in the comic that I haven't yet read, but why haven't we heard of anyone turning to stone? That is what the Cockatrices do, right?
...Right?
6016801 I was pretty satisfied with the action on this one. Glad it worked!
6016822 If only I could fit it into the time table ;)
6016835 If you look them in the eyes absolutely. I'm going with the fact these things are towering and most ponies would be looking them in the bottom of the belly.
6016861 Sadness. Oh well
6016861 It turned out most well.
At first I thought this was a dream sequence or game night O&O, but it didn't switch.
6016861 That makes sense... I'm just thinking about pegasi flying at them from above/eye-level, ponies in high-up windows, birdwatchers... Though if anyone from the ground tried to look up the head might be eclipsed and blacked out by the sun or something if seen from the right angle. Now I'm thinking too hard about it.
I'm seeing 'comedy' and 'slice of life' tags here...
And reading neither. This is a dramatic intrigue story, with perhaps adventure later on. It's not at all comedic in tone, nor does it focus on a character or group of character's basic routines and a specific segment of their lives. Rather, it has continually broadened in scope and has been much more focused on a long-standing historical event and now an ancient murder mystery with very little to do with the main character's life directly.
6016987 When I tag stories I do so by taking the whole of the work into account. On the whole, Secrets is going to be lighter and more comedic than the first few chapters suggests. It certainly deals with serious issues but it absolutely wouldn't fit into Tragedy, Sad, or Dark.
Slice of Life is another tricky flag. Would this be slice of life for a regular pony? Probably not. Silent Knight is a royal guard though and I think it is appropriate. Tags are loose guidelines and none are going to fit every story perfectly. I fit them as best as I can.
Needs more Adeptus Astartes.
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For those who don't read the comics, this also happened: http://i.imgur.com/At7od6Q.jpg
It was being assaulted by giant cockatrices.
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At first I read that as giant cockroaches. I would seriously be freaking out.
You know, when I started reading this I immediately remembered the comic and thought that this was some sort of silly dream sequence. I guess it wasn't but oh well, it was still funny. You even gave a little nod to Azurite lol.
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Same here.
This chapter was a blast
6017462 I'm glad you enjoyed it! It came out really well for me when I was reworking the draft.
6017446 6017315 What a horrifying thought!
6017317 It seemed like a silly thing to reference but it just kind of worked... Why not a big battle in Canterlot with giant chickens?
6017226 Yes it did... yes it did...
6017031 Well... if we did that they may just destroy the entire planet from orbit to ensure the cockatrices don't spread.
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It blew my mind.
That's a pun, you ignorant blowhordes.
The cockatrice invasion, interesting to see that event show up in the story.
Azurite!
Good call, it makes sense that the guard would see some action in this engagement.
This felt...very random? You get a point for the idea though, but also lose half a point for I've read better chase/fight around the city scenes.
On another note, I'm quite sure I've heard "Oopsie Daisy" while listening to Taps' BABSCon 2015 set around 16:30 minute mark.
And yay for Azurite
6017536 Yeah, it isn't exactly something that I think they could ignore. It seemed like a fun tie in for the comic book.
6017545 Well, I'm sure it is like Who's Line is it Anyway where everything is made up and the points most certainly don't matter.
Awesome chapter! <3 Azu!
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The trick to a good Tyrannical Celestia is precisely NOT to change her personality. You just make her a character who is so focused on the goal, on creating a land of perfect peace and harmony, that she loses sight of the fact that the ends don't always justify the means. You make a character that believes, completely and utterly, that everything she's doing is what's best for her little ponies and will ultimately keep them safe, happy, and worry free.
My two favorites at the moment would probably be the Celestia from the Upheaval series (though I wouldn't really classify her as a tyrant) and the version of her in Lines and Webs.
LOL
Seriously, this story is the perfect combination of everything that makes a story good.
It's true. Silent Knight's situational blindness only afflicts him when it comes to noticing not at all subtle hints from mares.
Wow. I was not expecting. Go Luna. Also I hope Silent gives Luna a talking to for breaking the rules. Good chapter. I can't wait for the next update.
Kick their tails, Luna!
6017766 Uhm, that would change her personality by basically turning her into Hellen A from the "Happiness Patrol".
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Celestia may not have been given much depth yet, but she's not that delusional and stupid. The 'villain' who does everything for what they believe is 'the greater good' and so forth is a trope unto itself.
If ANY pony would fall into that trap, it'd be Twilight, whose lack of experience, obsession with order, and neurotic tendencies would easily lead her down the path to a dictator who slaughters while smiling all those who upset her little vision of harmony... (in other words... Hellen A from "The Happiness Patrol").
Woop! Nicely done! Giant cockatrices. Didn't see that coming. Whoo!
For a second I was going to ask out of which ass did you pull this scene from, but since I don't read the comics, I guess that's as good an explanation as any.
Although, in all honesty, ponies getting surprised by a celestial body powering magical creatures up? Shame on you, Luna. Even Aang managed to anticipate Sozin's Comet.
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Man, it's almost like you don't know how the Alternate Universe tag works or something. Of course it's not exactly like her canon personality, and unless you go around pointing out in every AU story on the site how their canon characters' personalities deviate slightly from how they're portrayed in the show I really don't even understand why you're getting so bent out of shape about this.
The whole reason Tyrant Celestia exists is they're taking traits shown in canon and pushing them to extremes. If that really bothers you so much, at least you now know the name of the tag to avoid in the future.
Also, I have no idea who that character is you're referencing or whatever show it's from.
6019940 My tie in doesn't seem to be resonating well. I'm actually a bit surprised that several folks are fairly down on the cockatrices ;D I actually thought it was a cute part of the comic and something that would most certainly be noticed! Still, it was fun to do, especially as I run out of anything in the show to tie into >_<
6019891 No one expects the giant cockatrices!
6018640 She is a powerful pony! Blasting giant chickens into orbit.
6018578 A stern talking to in a quiet room where no pony would see it =D
6017901 He can't be good at everything ^_^
6017897 I'm truly glad you're enjoying it!
6017651 Thank you kindly!
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Then don't tie into the show, man! There are like a bajillion things going on just Silent Knight tier - the gryphon thing, his new responsibilities, the batponies, the dates with Crystal, so much going on! And we're not even at the point where Twilight will need her own house yet and Luna will try to be supportive, having played the "younger princess" part for oh so long
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I think it fits rather nicely!
That 'oh my. wasn't expecting that' moment. It IS a bit off putting/startling, but ONLY because the show puts into our heads (fans) a specific plotline.
Personally, I like the deviation! It shows that you're willing to expand on the general plotline of the show, and add a bit of the mystery and magic of the rest of the MLP universe!
....in this case, giant chicken/basilisk hybrids XD
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Says you. With a bit of practice, I'm sure he'll work it out.
...Ok, maybe more than a bit of practice, but the point still stands.
Why do I have a feeling this comet will play a bit of an antagonist role in this story?