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When the title & power of Dragon Lord passes down to Garble, the dragons of the world viciously unite and strike Equestria which was still recovering from Tirek's destruction. After many devastating casualties the princesses send word for dire help...more specifically the magical nation of Fiore....
A collab between me and yellowpikmin88 over in DeviantArt!
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Awesome! Please update soon!
Erza killed this for me .
6100674 So...you like?
6100774 If erza wasn't wasn't in it yea
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH
SOOOO AWESOMEEEEE
Well there are a few mistakes here and there but nothing too major I guess plus I like how you keep everyone in character in this. The Fairy Tail characters actually seem like how they are which is always a big plus in my book. This won't be easy trying to balance out a huge cast like this but so far you've been handling it well.
New. Chapter. Now
I'll be waiting
-CactusMan
I really think you need an editor as this chapter really needs it. You forget to capitalize a lot of the words in this, plus you keep using the numbers instead of spelling it out. Like "you 2 need" you should always spell the number when you keep just using the numbers it looks very childish like you haven't even reached high school yet. The only time you should write the actual number are things like addresses, serial numbers things like that. When you describe three dragons for instance don't say 3 dragons as it looks really bad.
One sentence that could use a fix is this one:
This grained a groan form both Freed and Evergreen who rolled their eyes in annoyance.
I take it you meant
This gained a groan from both Freed and Evergreen who rolled their eyes in annoyance.
Looks like you've got a few minor grammatical errors in the chapters, nothing major, but I would advise reading through the chapters and fixing any errors you find, to help you out here's an error that I noticed
I think you meant to say "Happy sang"
I agree with Agent, your chapters are riddled with writing errors, you really need to get an editor or proofreader (preferably both) to look over your work before it gets posted.
KO hope you keep writing cause this story is awesome.
6100774 KO please say that the next chapter is almost done PLEASE.
6100774 KO next chapter PLEASE update SOON.
KO awesome chapter, hope that Spike and Twilight get things work out soon.
Awesome chapter. Dang Spike that was heavy.
Well... That certainly was something. A good something though.
Poor Stupid Garble
Stays and fights - Inevitably Wrecked
Invades their world - Gets Crushed by Acnologia
Does Nothing - Natsu looking for a fight will probably beat him up anyway
6851924 you catch on pretty quick
but my collab partner and I promise that the fight will be epic! ^^;
KO awesome chapter, glade things work out with Spike and everybody.
I wonder what's next...
Interesting, intriguing, fascinating, thought-provoking story.
KO awesome chapter, Twilight and Spike getting closer and the battle is close for our heroes.
Calling it. Merlinda is Spike's mother.
Also great chapter and please post more soon.
Happy to spike
You looooove her
KO awesome chapter, guess Spike will have his future girlfriend soon and the final battle with Garble is drawing near.
Nice. This story is coming along nicely and I hope that the story won't end with the eventual defeat of Garble.
KO awesome chapter, the fight will be at the enemies HQ and hope to see the good fights along the way.
Sooo spikes 13 here how old does that make twi and the mane six? Like 20? Yeah rarity has no place to talk when she was ok with spike hitting on her. I mean how old was twilight when spike hatched? 7 maybe 10 tops.
KO awesome chapter, looks like Spike and Melinda are going to confess their feelings to each other and the final battle approaches.
7168932 Thank you! Share this story if you can so that this story can reach the Featured Box~!
7169045 KO can do.
So is garble a rapist now?
7169137 It's more like a future bride, kinda like a forced arranged marriage
7169175
Marginally better
7169205
7169175. It still leads to rape
7175862
That's why it's only marginally better in that it hasent happened yet
7175879 but this time its rape she can't get away from. A forced mate is the same as saying an eternal rapist
Please be sure to comment, my partner and I worked really hard on these chapters and would love to hear feedback from all of you!
7486456 KO awesome chapter, Spike challenge Garble to a dual and Ember has form a rebellion with the new help of our captured heroes. Can't wait to see how this will turn out!
Wow, with a bit more training, Spike will likely become super OP!
KO awesome chapter, Spike won the duel but Garble unleashed a horrible power when he ate the stone and the final is at hand. Will Spike and his friends/family stop this disgraceful of a dragon and save Equestria?
This story is awesome
7501041 Tune in next time for the next chapter of the epic collab! Chapter 12: The Dragon Civil War!
I really think there should be more fairy tail mlp crossovers they are good together
And all evidence to the contrary calls your bullshit.
I've added the Gore tag, cause the next few chapters are going to be intense!
He's not dead.
Is this all of fairy tail helping or just someone like Natsu?
I thought this story was canceled glad it wasn't this is great would have been better if I was listening to fairy tail op16 strike back while reading it