This account has been taken over by my friend. Thank you all who enjoyed my story. He is now in charge. In short terms he is the captain now
It's three months into the war, and no victory is within sight. The Solar Empire is slowly spreading their influence over Equestria, and the New Lunar Republic is in serious need of a miracle. Sometimes miracles are obvious. Sometimes the miracle is right under your nose. Sometimes, you need to look at things with a different angle to find it.
Told in the POV of Pinkie Pie. All of them are just normal humans. No angels, but the unicorns know magic.
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Well, except it almost seems like I've missed an entire story that's preceding this. It's good.
Nice pacing, good grammar, nice paragraphing. Nice story overall.
If you manage to go into the back story of when and why the war started I assure you this will be good.
Hm, seems good.
Chapter's a bit short compared to what i'm used to. But I can live with it.
But as I said on my comment on the first chapter. Would want some back story on why, how and when the war started.
I uploaded it before I read the comment. I didn't see the comment until later. Thanks for the advice
Your welcome. Your writing as I've already stated is really good, keep up the good work.
And thx for the fav and the watch.
I am sorry about the huge delay. I just don't feel good about MLP that much anymore. So in turn I have turned this account over to my good friend. I told him where I plan to go with the story, and he has a much better writing style. He says he's willing to take this account for the few fans I have. Thank you all. And be nice to him.
I would like some backstory on the war as well but other than that I like it
Well at least Rainbow is on the right side. The difference between me and Luna is when I have an enemy
You two do that while I go argue with Celestia again on who tops.
For me at least. I enjoy making sunbutt look bad and exposing her