Twilight isn't exactly sure about her new babysitter. She seemed perfect in every way. But Cadence surprises her by giving her some advice she never thought she'd receive.
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The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.
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Aw. This was a cute story, and understandable...just wish finding someone you like or finding friends was that easy...
I can't help but feel that this story reminded me about my own childhood. I used to have trouble making friends too as well as bullying, so I can relate to Twilight.
5945136 I hear ya.
5945277 yep
"Never forget who you are, for the world will certainly not. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you"- Tryion Lannister
This was adorable. A little short, though, and that bit at the end might raise a few questions regarding continuity, but I'd be interested in reading your explanation.
5945151 I'm practically twilight other than the fact that I'm not boring if anything I'm hyperactive and strange
so yeah it reminds me of my childhood too.
5945666 Well there is no continuity of course. It's a totally different universe from the one where Twilight ends up in a basement obsessively tracking paranormal activity and kind of neglecting her personal hygiene.
5945666 lol Well I'm more like Pinkie Pie to be exact.
Adorably relatable!
True, Flash showed up at the end but adorably relatable nonetheless! 
Nice. And I see you used my aunt's art as the cover art.
5945136 My thoughts exactly
I'm not a fan of EQ Flash (big surprise huh ?), but seeing him as just a kid and not the "oh hi I'm rebel popular yet awkward dork" makes it works just nice. It's a short story so I shouldn't expect too much but I feel that it could have use a little bit more words to have more exchange than you know them saying that they are nerds and that Twilight need to be more confident in herself. Maybe letting Twilight talk more about her insecurity of being different from the other girls, we know that twilight is very intelligent but I feel you made her maybe a little bit too mature here (even if it is compensate in the end with her interraction with Cadence).
I may be picky about these since the story work well in itself and I liked it but I feel that it could have been even better if it lasted a little longer for more character development. ;)
5947046 the artist is your aunt? Cool!
D'awww.
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Yep. If you ever want a picture for cover art, I can ask her to do it if you want.
5947120 oh thanks! I was actually thinking about doing a on going story about the dazzlings! Do you think she could draw me something for that?
Brad.
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I counter with Hitler, Stalin, etc. etc.
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Yep, just give me a rough outline of what you want.
5947137
How is that a counter to that quote?
Neither Hitler nor Stalin where ashamed of who they were nor what they did. If anything, they'd serve as examples.
(As an internet dweller, you should know that as soon as you bring Hitler into a conversation, you're wrong.)
5947208 alright, I'll message you
5947059 Yep
This was really cute and heartfelt. I normally just like these but there is the occasional jewel that I simply cannot not fav. So, with that said, have a like and fav.
You get all of my d'aaaww. All of it.
5947137 Wtf it was supposed to be a nice saying.
D'AAAAAAAAAAAWWW!
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It counters "Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you".
Did I have to name famous people who were proud of the vile acts they committed? No. There are countless more, but I figured if I just said "murderers, drug pushers, gangsters, etc., etc." you wouldn't even care, but by bringing someone famous up, you actually pay attention.
But hey, I could just as easily Google "dictators of the past" or "serial killers who plead guilty" and use any name on those lists that came to a deadly end because of their actions, if that would make you feel better about using a website like TvTropes as your go to for laws regarding rational arguments.
Would you like me to do that for you? It wouldn't even be a bother.
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Okay, first of all, yes, you are right. There are people who have done horrible things and are ashamed of themselves and what they did. Those people do indeed serve as examples for not armouring yourself with who you are.
Now, in regard to the 'it will not be used to hurt you', I think it would be necessary to note I interpret this as 'it will not be used to hurt you emotionally'. Seen that way, the examples you brought up in the first place (Hitler and Stalin) are, as I said, no examples for people who can be emotionally hurt by who they are.
About my last sentence, I thought it was clear it was no part of a rational argument, but a off-hand tongue-in-cheek comment since I was referring to a website like TvTropes. I understand that that isn't really clear from the wording and the context, so I shouldn't have posted it that way.
I'm sorry, and extra sorry if I got you worked up. Nothing like that was ever my intention.
5949810
Thanks and I admit I had been only looking at it as a physical pain, so it does hold a little bit of merit emotionally, though people in the MLP fandom probably have plenty of their own counter examples.
And yes, I had thought you were serious about the TvTropes thing, silly text based communication...
Yeah, people trying "argue" with things like that is one of my pet peeves, so I am sorry about the heavy sarcasm and condescending tone.
hasbro should do a subplot in EQG3 where flash meets the human twi & thinks she's having a memory loss
Brilliant
5952442 That sounds brilliant.
Everyone's already said it but… D'aaaaaaaaawe
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I need not say anymore.
Favorited.
Short and simple with a very strong message. Can't get much better than that.
Also, you're never too old for a swing set.
Never.
A short and simple fic that doesnt try to be more than it is.
I've just reached my cuteness quota for the day.
Fucking
Adorable
I think the story is adorable.
"Or girl. I mean, we live in an enlightened society. Who knows, maybe one day some bad-girl with a leather jacket and a motorcycle will end up falling over her herself for you."
If only that ending was canon. "sigh"
Hey, NewYorkBrony, I don't suppose you would let me do a reading of this for my YouTube channel, would you?
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Sure go ahead!
9848197
Awesome! Thanks.
Awwww so sweet.
Impressive
Been there myself, been bullied most of my life and it's no walk in the park or great to deal with. Except for me it was a disability I had instead of what twilight had.
That's something I've since come to deal with myself as well with my disability.
I feel the same for what I like the most being trains.