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Did you do this all by yourself?

5925261 Yeah I did it kinda just came out of me one afternoon so I figured I should post it

Great story, I hope you will continue :D

5927070 oh it will I'm writing the next chapter as we speak

This is a great clopfic, sissy spike is awesome! I also like how Twilight's a voyeur for his little fun times. I can't wait to see what comes next, my only hope is that I might get to see some Spike X Discord action.

5927951 Discord was an idea of mine but not for a couple of chapters, I want to hit Sissy Spike with a bit more small guns then hit him with the Big gun that is the lord of all chaos Discord

5927968 Hehehe sounds like a good plan.

5925279 Not bad...

5928086 why thank you I feel I worked hard on it and if that means people can read something i wrote i can enjoy that

5928093 I mean, there are a few grammatical errors, but it's ok, other than that.

5928106 well you know to error is human and i'm glad it doesn't effect the reading to much. I think i need a better proof reader

5928111 You could probably use me as one.. I'm great when it comes to grammar. Like I said, the story is fine regardless though.

5928139 well i don't mind letting you do so.

5928160 I suppose PMing would work in this case.

5928168 true i will when the next chapter is done

>FILL MY FAGGOT ASS
-The story could use not having that word, really. -_- It's just a turn-off, you know ?

Other than that, I really like it. It's just the choice of word that need some work.