The enclave has fifty four cloud ships that have served well for them over the last two hundred years, but what with war brewing below, there may come a time when the pegasi require more then just that fifty four. Its time for one engineer to shine as he tries to solve this problem. But things are not always as they seem below, as we all will soon find out. Two hundred years of mystery and cover-ups stand in the way of Wink and his destiny.
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Quick tip: numbers below 100 should be written as words, unless they are products of a 100, in which case write them as words, too.
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5903359 Thank you, I'll make some adjustments immediately.
Another Fallout Equestria. NEXT!
You should really do space lines between paragraphs. In its current state, the story looks weird.
And while DerpyMuffin7 is right when it comes to numbers, the perk should have +1 instead of +One and a colon after the "taught you one thing"
5908476 Thank you, I think I was mistakenly using an essay format of writing style for the paragraphs. Also thank you with the colon thing. I fixed it now.