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DemonWolf


The Shadow Wolf Mage

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Tenchi Muyo X MLP
Nuada was a regular kid on earth until he got his copy of the 'Ultimate guide to Jurai, and related things,' upon opening the book Nuada found himself on Equestria, turned into a Juraian.
Thanks to Inazuma for making, Virgil:seeker of knowledge, who will be the source of Nuada's displacement.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 30 )

Let's see where and how you take this

I'll track this to see where it goes. Tenchi Myou crossovers are far too rare and good ones are almost none existant. Hopefully you'll keep a decent update pace.

From observing this we find it a odd trait how most human displaced 'forgive' or let major slights go, as a millennia is not just a day of tricked imprisonment.

rather laid back kind of guy

For now he seems Mary Sue'ish... but that is probably because it's still at the start.

Hoping to see the plot moving along soon :twilightsmile:

5902179
You said it. Off the top of my head Sleeping With The Girls is the only one I know of.

Sadly, despite what TVtropes says, it appears to be dead again.

This got rather confusing rather quickly. The time skips without any warning or indication made this chapter hard to follow.

6387923 Rereading it a few times I have to agree, I think I'll scrap and rewrite the chapter.

I recommend going through the second half of the chapter again. It felt even more rushed than before and I had some issues trying to keep up with who is and where. Everything happened so quickly with no scene transitions that would have helped clear such issues.

Interestin', though the proofreading needs work. Lots of grammar misusage, like 'there' and 'their' or 'your' and 'you're'.

7157013 Thank you, I sadly don't have a editor so I just try to read though it a million times but I still miss things

Too bad you were unable to link to the chapter where he crossed over with Mistress Change yet.

7169771 It was actually a huge crossover with Sparkle and Nuada going to help Mistress Change and Avarice fight a guerilla force of a 'secret society'. You know the chapter Regreme, I'm pretty sure you even commented, did you? :rainbowhuh:

7170073 I may have. It's been a while. XD

lol Cute update on this. Glad I'm slowly catching up.

Finally caught up. Loving this so far.

I extremely hope my secret project finishes soon. Kinda can't start on any of my 20 Displaced ideas till then beyond brainstorming and notes, and I'd love to cross over with this. Especially since many of them will have harems too.

Another interestin' chapter, eh?^^

7259468 Thank you, I finally feel like I'm getting a little traction

7262610 Glad to hear it.:D I just wish that my project would finish soon. Would love to cross over with this great fic, but situations just aren't allowing such yet.-_-'

lol Adorable chapter end there. XD

“It must have gone to Nuada’s place, and there’s a clear path there sense Cinder came through a few weeks ago.”


'since', not 'sense'.;)

And finished. Glad to see you return to this.:D

DUNCAN! YOU FISH! Now I have to try and write ponies again!

STOP RIGHT THERE CRIMINAL SCUM! YOU'VE VIOLATED THE LAW!

“I was alone and everypony I met thought I was some monster. I was alone, traveling the countryside, foraging for food, hunting, and stealing to get by. I spent a winter in a cave near a town where I would steal food from ponies. Every night I would cry myself to sleep, and wish I was home in my world. I missed my family, and friends.” Nuada kept talking to her.

Wait.. doesn't that mean that ever other race (besides the ponies) didn't see you as a monster? And also why didn't you go with one of the other races, after all everypony only counts those of the pony species. If you want to count non-ponies then you have to use species neutral (or words for a specific species like everydragon, everyminotaur, etc) words like everyone, every person, etc.

“I’m not sure, I fixed the main drive unit but everytime I try to power it up it starts to overload and forces a shut down. The read outs don’t make much sense, as it says it’s over producing, but it’s only running at minimum settings. There are all sorts of wavelengths coming off of it that doesn't make sense. Then there is the fact that even with my comms array working all signals are scrambled. It’s frustrating, I haven’t told Nuada because I don’t want to trouble him too much more, but it’s looking like I am very much stranded here. At least until command comes looking for me, but it seems they haven’t come here yet and it is way past search and rescue time.”

The ambient magic (a.k.a the magic in the atmosphere) of the current world that you're on is going apeshit on your machines.

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