He was living a normal life when a mare he used to know met him, again. He is a father of her child. That shocked him, because the mare was married with somepony else. Before he understood that he was father, had happened a terrible accident. It was a couple months ago, and now a little blank flank was on his hooves, completely unable to care about her own. She needed his care, presence and love, and he decided to give her everything could, everything he was. Because, he was her father.
Chapters (5)
Guess what bitch nigga
This shit gon get fuckin narrated, yo.
Where'd ya find that cover art?
is there going to be more I like this
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Yes, for sure yes.
But I need some time.
5908290 ok love the story
This is a great story and I would love to see more. I know how hard it is to get you first story out and I had to do mine on my one because no one could help but keep up the great work and see your story through because it will turn out great.
Just have fun with it.
TwilightXLuna Out
LOL LOVE IT
hope to read more soon
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Thanks! Warm words are what my fuel is.
5969510 your welcomed hope you have a good day
so much DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Love this can't wait for more Twilight was so cute
Twilight is just the cutest little ball of fun and happiness! More please.
I really like this story and this chapter hope to read more soon
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T-Thanks...
5999798 your welcome but it is a really good story
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This story needs more.
Badly.
Soon.
I have a feeling I know where this story is going.
looks like Twilight has a charm all her own that can make anyone what to be friends with her without her even trying.
5999798 I like the pacing as well and the feel of the characters. though I gotta ask what time frame is this set in and will we find out what happened to Twilight's mom and dad and if we will still have Cadence and Shining Armor as Twilight's family.
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It's before the main plot. Now I think, I should have added "Alretnative Universe", because... You already know why. About her mother and... not biological father, yes. Someday. I prefer not spoiler about Shining Armor. His role is set in my mind already, but before it'll be written down I can't say a thing. I don't want to disappoint you, and even more than that, I don't want to damage the story.
6006153 cool no worries then. course the greatest threat to Equestria is adorable Twilight Sparkle.
And, um. What do you think?
can't wait to see where this goes
Cant wait for more love this story
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You eager me to write... Thank you.
I enjoy this story hope to read more soon
Give me momlestia plz
like right now
this is soo awesome
twi don't do it celestia will destroy you if you eat her cake
i know i commented on this chapter before and i am sorry to bug you i was just wondering if by any chance you know when you might post next chapter
i understand that life can get in the way and i don't want to rash you or anything i just asking if you don't know that is okay and take your time on making a grate chapter
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O-Ok. I'm gonna sit down at this and just do it. I didn't know that someone really want this to be continued. : 3
Good night! <3
6499396 good to know thank you for letting me know and also sorry if I made you feel like you need to rush you don't need to rush I just really like this story and I really like to know what happens next I'm sorry if I sounded mean or anything like that
Sorry for bugging you but I was woundering why you put this story on hiatus it wasn't on hiatus the last time I looked on this story so I'm just woundering?
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I will to continue this when my grip on the language will be better. I don't want to bug my previous editor as much as I used to because he is kinda busy with life right now. I have some other stories to write, too, (in plans) but I focus at learning english. As probably you know, it isn't my native tongue and, to be honest, I am pretty dense when it comes to english.
However, knowing that someone actually likes my story makes me feel better, and I used to feel like shit recently, so I will... reconsider continuing it, if that is what you really want from me, friend.
6704041 I really like the story and would love to read more and keep asking at times. But at the same time I don't want ro force people to keep going just because I'm focring them. Shier I'll ask if and when they will update and give them some idles on how to gwt out of a wrighters block. But that is as far as I go if you don't want to work on it it is fine.I might be upset about it. But I'll be even more upset if you foces your sel to wright something you don't even want to do. So it is up to you.
Ps. Sorry for any bad spelling I have a reading and wrighting disabilty got better on my reading but spelling no so much.
hey how have you been?
Hey how has it been?
Really sweet and adorable story
Twilight sounds like like me when it comes to food . Her eyes are bigger than her stomach ( which is true for me
. )