To Spread Joy

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No one is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes.

But Pinkie often wonders what mistakes mean for her. Does any slip-up cause a party to fail or a pony to be disappointed? Do mistakes make her a failure?

Participant in the Writeoff Association's April 2015 contest "Great Expectations".

Goodfic Bin Approved

Now with a Dramatic Reading on Youtube

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Trickilee

Trickilee #1 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · · ·

Nice work. I feel the text between dialogues could be a little meatier, but you are being pretty consistent with it and that works too. Pinkie-perfect!

Cynewulf

Cynewulf #2 · Apr 22nd, 2015 · · ·

Not bad.

Regis-Th3-Lesser

Regis-Th3-Lesser #3 · Apr 26th, 2015 · · ·

Hello sir and or ma'am you have submitted your story for review in The Goodfic Bin, and I am happy to say that you have made it in!
Here, have our ribbon.

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You've earned it!
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PresentPerfect

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PresentPerfect #4 · Apr 27th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Good job cleaning this up! :)

Aceman67

Aceman67 #5 · May 6th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I find that the idea of Pinkie coming to terms with the fact that "You can't make everyone happy" incredibly depressing.

ferventwilight

ferventwilight #6 · Jul 28th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Thank you for following me! Do you have a reason why? I discovered you from Shadow Kirby, and I enjoyed your stories, so i followed you.

Gumball2

Gumball2 #7 · Jul 28th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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I have a very lenient policy for following people. If I like your story enough to fav it, I follow you. If you follow me, I follow you right back. But sometimes, I follow people I find interesting and you just happen to be one of those people.

P.S. I'm a little curious. How exactly did you get from Shadow Kirby to me?

ShadowKirby

ShadowKirby #8 · Sep 24th, 2015 · · ·

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Wait wat I don't know how to respond to finding me mentioned in the comments of a random story! XD
Coincidences are crazy sometimes.

Oh, and I think it may be because I have your story 'Beyond the Crossroads' in my Underrated Gems bookshelf.
That or the fact many of your stories are in my 'MUST Read it Later' bookshelf.

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