You seem to have javascript disabled, or your browser is failing to execute it properly. Much of Fimfiction's functionality requires javascript so we suggest you turn it on!

Royalty's Guard

Graywolf, a royal guard listed under the not known category is slowly making his way to the top, however, as he reaches the top he realizes how much Luna can mean to him. Is this perplexed but happy lady what this young man needs?

Chapters (1)

Comments ( 9 )

Viewing 1 - 50 of 9
- Newest First
- Oldest First

For Thy Princess

For Thy Princess #1 · Apr 20th, 2015 · 7 · ·

5886178
Not so kind for a guy with a smiling Twilight Sparkle, are you?

Mr Evergreen

Mr Evergreen #2 · Apr 20th, 2015 · · ·

Pity like

SuperGiantRobot

SuperGiantRobot #3 · Apr 20th, 2015 · 1 · 2 ·

This is almost exactly what a good story would be like if you to take away all of what made it good.

I want my two minutes back.

For Thy Princess

For Thy Princess #4 · Apr 20th, 2015 · · ·

5887550
Oh boy.

Thunderblast

Thunderblast #5 · Apr 21st, 2015 · · ·

Its a good start...but...you should space out your paragraphs better, and for dialogue, keep it separate with the short addition telling readers who said it. Also, you overused "Royal Guard" and "Griffin Kingdom". Those are my only complaints. Other than that, its pretty good. Ignore the haters.

For Thy Princess