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snowspektrum


oh look its snowy from the OC Outpost! he's so cool.

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Zero, a piece of something much less substantial, becomes a dashing young unicorn who discovers magic that some ponies could never have had dreamed of. He starts out with magic by using Wiccan magic from earth and getting much more powerful effects than he should. Can he keep up with physical, mental, and spiritual demands? Or is that the least of his worries?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 2 )

The story is good, there's just a few spelling and capitalization errors.
Proses is spelled process, and you need to capitalize the Z in Zero. In the third paragraph, you need to capitalize the I's in a couple places. I'm not trying to be rude, I'm just pointing this out. It's a good story so far.

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I actually really appreciate the input. I hope to start getting more done on this very soon. Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

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