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"But I don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked. "Oh, you can't help that," said the Cheshire Cat: "We're all mad here."

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Applejack has been known to be a stubborn pony. When she dies, she is convinced it is her time. Discord, however, comes in, and he doesn't want her to die. Why is Discord doing this, though? And why does Applejack keep refusing?

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A little one-shot I came up with. I made this story in an attempt to actually make a serious story. I'm not quite sure I succeeded.

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Wow, this is really good! (But, technically speaking, isn't Applejack's death mainly the CMC's faults? Sure Discord made her incapable of moving, but how could you guess that everything was going to catch on fire? But, i'm nit picking )

hm .... :/

i dont know ...
at some point i couldnt enjoy this story
and again Discord stands here as selfish, ignorant asshole ... -.-
holly crap
a prank !!! it iwas an f*cking accident and she says he "killed" her -.-
AS IF it was on porpuse
grrr
dunnu thats just how i felt
no fav for this then :/

AJ was played well -- Stubborn to the core. It is a bit gloomy for a pony afterlife. I liked the story.

I really liked this. It felt serious but yet it wasn't too heavy. Good job!

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