Ohai thar.
Just a totally random idea I had after going to my own chiropractic appointment, as well as a personal challenge to extend word count not by describing random things in surgical detail, but by using dialogue and gentle plot transition! As well, it's an experiment with a special type of narrator; omnipotent, so s/he knows Rainbow's thoughts, but occasionally gets taken over by Rainbow herself, with her personality and speech patterns. Also looking for someone who likes to make cover art. PM me if you're interested.
Cheers!
Chapters (1)
Any excuse to get rid of a wingboner.
812103 Bluh?
812110
Sorry man but you set yourself up for that one.
812151 What's with the wingboner thingy? Her dance?
812155
In the fanfiction universe a Wingboner is when a Pegasus is aroused sexually.
812165 Ik, but when is she aroused in this?
812169
Dude, don't bother. I made that joke on the fly the moment I saw the title of the fic, it appears that no one gets my sense of humor. Or lack thereof.
A few stylistic inconsistencies here and there (e.g. "What was I saying again?" seemed a bit out of place, especially when the narrator does not refer to him/herself again), I liked it very much. Excellent imagery.
812180 Thanks! By imagery, do you mean that I set the mental picture or what? Sorry, I'm quite new to this.
812187 Sort of. Imagery is how one describes the scenery, in order to "create a picture" (my favorite, for example, is "thousands of little green knives" to refer to grass-- it's not only apt and vivid but describes the terror that Dash feels when he falls perfectly).
812175
Oh! I totally get your humor!
I don't think I've ever heard of a book falling so fast!
wingboner?? Dudo you got that from .MOV
what the hell man
812175 I C WUT U DID THERE! Because when you get a wingboner your wings are stiff and you go to a chiropractor to y'know, loosen up a bit?
How Did noone see this coming?
Mare down Mare down I repeat we have a Mare down