This Story is written entirely in 3rd Person...
This Story is a repeat of a previous story I created that failed inevitably.
During her Summer Break, Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle have been sending each other letters through their magic books. Twilight has convinced Sunset the idea of coming to Equestria since Sunset has nothing to do. After much thought Sunset accepts the idea and returns to Equestria where she will be greeted by Twilight and Spike. While staying with Twilight in her castle Sunset begins to path to redemption. But along the way Sunset develops a stronger feeling then friendship towards Twilight.
This is an Intro story to a series i'm creating so bare in mind that this story is NOT my best work.
Chapters (18)
OK, why did you decide to start this over? I was looking forward to seeing how Sunset and Twilight would work together as princesses.
5885824 I've gotten too many errors over the comments and the PMs so I decided to start over. Don't worry the concept is still the same. They both will become Princesses but at a more later time then before i'm not trying to rush it like before.
Honestly, I prefer Sunset not become a Princess. She hasn't done nearly as much as Twilight to earn that. Hell, you might as well make Rarity or even Trixie onto princesses.
5886017 Well it was an idea since rarely anyone who did a Sunlight story attempt to make her a princess. But you are right about one thing. She didn't do as much or accomplished what Twilight has to become an Alicorn.
5886017 I won't make Trixie a Princess just for the simple fact that she also hasn't accomplished as much as Twilight and she like Sunset has a real cocky attitude. Which in my book doesn't deserve such a high role of that caliber. But against it's just my Opinion against millions of others.
5886102 I meant by your last story's logic, that you can make Rarity and Trixie into princesses.
I'm pretty damn sure that deleting a story and reuploading it again is against the site rules. Unless you made major changes to it, then publishing it again could get you in trouble. I hope that is not the case.
Also, could you not have come up with a better title for your story than "A Sunlight Story"?
Love this cant wait for more
5886431 We allow complete rewrites, where none of the original content is present and it's been totally recreated from the ground up, just using similar ideas.
5886431 Yes I know I could but I didn't want to and yes there is a lot if major changes
5886453 glad you like it
5886171 I can see if I can make another Fic on Rarity becoming an Alicorn
5886507 He was in the right to question it. It's rare to see the same story come up but different at the same time.
5886517 I know, I'm posting a comment to clear up confusion and perhaps prevent future people from getting upset about this story's existence or similar situations later on.
5886520 Oh okay thank you
5886507 Ah, okay then. Thanks for clarifying that!
Well Chapter 1 Will be up soon
5886514 You don't have to. It's just something that was bothering me in the last story.
5886615 Oh okay then.
A rewrite, eh? I'll read this.
5887638 It'll work Feather
Got to love Luna's line in this cant wait for more
5893548 She will play a bigger role similar to a Main Character even though she is a side Character. I won't spoil much but I will say that she helps one of them.
5893568 Can not wait
5893572 Patience is key.
I changed my name to my OC because I thought it would best suit me.
I say they will do it at the same time
love this story can't wait fore more
Nice chapter! I definitely look forward to some juicy confessions!
Love this
5916931 Glad you're enjoying it.
All I can say is I hope to see more of this in the near future I was sad the original ended up not working as well but the remake feels better.
Okay I like the story so far please continue honestly please don't restart the story again.
I look forward to the next chapter with massive and totaly bated bated breath.
5917810 There will be no more resets of this story. But yes there will be more to come a lot more.
This story is awesome
5919189 Thanks for the feedback but I will slow down the pace a bit so the story is longer.
I love this story. Keep up the good work. I expect great amounts of adorableness!
5920570 Good to hear. A lot of teamwork will be read off from this story from now until Chapter 20 or so
5920715 Whoa. That many? Awesome. I'll keep up with this. It's so cute!
5919705 that's alright with me take as much time as you need
Major Spoiler that I will put out now" There will be a Second book. It is called "The Battle of Friendship". My Profile Picture will tell you what will happen.. That is as much as I will tell you.
Love this can't wait fore more
5924058 Next chapter will be funny in some degree I haven't focused on the Comedy aspect of the story.
great chapter and story so far. :)
this chapter was pretty funny.
5924589 Pinkie's Logic is always very questionable but VERY funny at the same time.
Did anyone detect a foreshadowing in Chapter 9? If not the hint is read the beginning again.
*lol* Poor Sunset there is not anything in the world is the that can keep you safe! From the Pinke Pie
5927694 Indeed...
I'm at 10 dislikes... What did I do wrong