Hello make sure you review my story I'm new and if you dare cross me I will enjoy crushing you slowly.
Twilight sparkle has the worse day of her life her brother abandons her, her friends left her, and her mentor left her.
Her days was about to become more worse but when she meet a certian composer in her life she was about to change with new friends, new relationships, and new skills to her new destiny all because of him:
"Hello my name is Yoshiya Kiryu, but you could call me Joshua."
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what crossover is this of?
that's exactly how you spell Joshua
This story seems interesting.
Huh...a different direction...
keep going plx
This is AWSOME please keep going. Just a little longer chapters like 1500 words
5900604 It going to be a mega crossover with different worlds.
Stop while your ahead, this kinda isn't good.
This is getting interesting can't wait for more
You have to get some one to pre read your chapter's
interesting I didn't to find a crossover we here about the world ends with you
I want to read this, I really do, especially since I enjoyed the DS game a lot. But if the grammar of the description is any indication, I have a strong feeling that I'd have a hard time reading it without my compulsion to fix errors causing me to rip my hair out.
If I were to have written it, this is how the description should read:
Keep going I'm very interested in the story and want to keep reading
I definitely love the game "The World Ends With You" and I'll stay around to see where you take it. A few things though.
1. Don't ever try and rush your own writing. Remember you aren't being forced to write this and you should take you time and enjoy it.
2. Make sure to give it a quick edit before you upload. As a writer, it's very easy to miss your mistakes because you know what you meant to write. Try saying it to yourself out loud and see if something doesn't sound quite right.
3. Make sure you never make it a chore. You're writing this for your own enjoyment and to share with others. If it gets to the point where you don't enjoy writing it, don't be afraid to put the story down for a bit.
4. There are plenty of people who like to help edit stories, so don't be afraid to put up a note saying you need an editor.
Anyways, I hope you enjoy writing this.
You shouldn't listen to others when they tell you that your story here is not good. They clearly want to bring you down. Do not give them that satisfaction.