The Hunt

Twilight Sparkle: Respected student of Celestia, Princess of Friendship, and a Vampony to boot. Her mother trained her, just like her grandma trained her mother. Now, she is on the hunt for a pony and this pony is Starlight Glimmer. Let's hope Twilight isn't too thirsty.

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Zocarik

Zocarik #1 · Apr 16th, 2015 · 1 · 1 ·

Celestia has long since despised the idea of me feeding on blood but has agreed that, to keep me alive. I would need to be allowed to feed.

Celestia has long despised the idea of me feeding on blood but to keep me alive, has agreed that I would need to be allowed to feed.

Jamie P Rose

Jamie P Rose #2 · Apr 16th, 2015 · · ·

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Thanks for pointing that out, after looking at it, it did seem rough and you smoothed it out. So, again, thank you.

Phazon_Corrupted_Unicorn

Phazon_Corrupted_Unicorn #3 · Apr 16th, 2015 · 3 · ·

That was good. Please write more like this!

Alondro

Alondro #4 · Apr 17th, 2015 · 2 · 9 ·

Yep, prototypical vampony fic.

Nothing of interest, glossing over or ignoring of all potential issues, complete erasure of Twilight's personality, and completely inexplicable mention of Cadance being ok with bloodsucking killers.

Vampires suck.

Jamie P Rose

Jamie P Rose #5 · Apr 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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If you don't like them then why did you read it?

idlepony

idlepony #6 · Apr 18th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Best one shot story EVER

Jamie P Rose

Jamie P Rose #7 · Apr 18th, 2015 · · ·

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I'm glad you liked it!

idlepony

idlepony #8 · Apr 18th, 2015 · · ·

5875856 you know this is what might happen if the show was dark

Jamie P Rose

Jamie P Rose #9 · Apr 18th, 2015 · 3 · 1 ·

Yeah, though it would be cool if Twilight did actually capture Starlight on the show, what an episode that would be. Twilight the princess bringing Starlight to justice.

Alondro

Alondro #10 · Apr 19th, 2015 · 1 · 5 ·

5875327 To refresh the memory of just how badly they suck. It's very hard to keep such awfulness in mind for very long.

StormLuna

StormLuna #11 · Jun 9th, 2015 · · ·

Poor Starlight, I mean seriously. Couldn't you have had Twilight go after Trixie instead?, or have Rarity stab her in the back and have her feed on her?

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