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StoryDragon


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Throughout Equestria, ponies cherish the unique symbols upon their rumps, which boldly represent their special talents and life long passions.

However, for a select few, gaining their cutie marks and realising what makes them special has caused nothing but heart ache and despair. It is these ponies who form the cutie markless; a group lead by Starlight Glimmer - a powerful unicorn with the ability to remove a ponies cutie mark, and replace it with one which represents nothing but equality.

So who exactly are these ponies? And why did they decide to give up something as precious as their individuality?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 28 )

Chronicles. No apostrophe needed. :)

I like this! It was neat the way you worked Cheese Sandwich into Party Favor's backstory. I guess Pinkie's not the only party pony who had a problem with him. :)

You must have thought very hard about this because it makes so much sense! I was really drawn into Party Favor's thoughts and could clearly picture everything he was describing. I cannot wait for the next chapters. Well done!

5872751 Ah right, thank you :) Yeah I thought it would be a nice little story to work on, the ponies in the new episode all had really cool designs and I wanted to know more about them. There must be a reason why they decided to join up with Starlight after all.


5872987 Thank you very much, I'm trying to write the chapters in the style of the characters who are telling their stories. I'm happy that you like it so far :)

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Indeed its good to know that pinkie wasnt alone in cheese making her feel useless. It makes me mad again just thinking about it! but i cant hate him for it.:pinkiesad2:

This is great so far :pinkiehappy: Fab idea I really felt like Party Favor was telling the story! I look forward to the other chapters!

great chapter, i'm hoping this story will continue.:pinkiehappy:

I'm assuming each chapter is going to be a different one of the markless ponies? This set up actually reminds me of the Pony POV series, which is pretty cool.

I admit, I'm not as a big a fan of the markless ponies as I am of Starlight- but I still liked this. And I especially liked her speech at the end ; it's nice to see Starlight convincing someone to give up their cutie mark, rather than just stealing it.

(For criticism... I thought Party Favor was a little more formal than I would have expected him to be, using words like "nay", but it does make him different from Cheese and Pinkie's hyperactivity.)

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I feel like Starlight set Cheese up. :rainbowhuh: :pinkiehappy: Awesome chapter so far!

Well, I like it! :pinkiehappy: And I have a question, are you going to include other ponies besides the Mane Four? Like Amber Tresses, for example? :rainbowkiss:
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5891323 Thank you! Hm... possibly, I'm finding it hard to get the names or cutie marks of the rest of them online. Do you have any links to where I could find this information? I may include just a few others if I have idea's for them which make sense, but I won't put any in for the sake of it. Amber Tresses is a pretty cool pony though, I wasn't aware of her name until now. Why is she called that? I understand the Tresses part, but no part of her is amber, so is that to do with her cutie mark? (Sorry for being dumb, I've only seen the episode once) Anyway, will see what I can do :)

5891390 Thank you! There's a pony called Bacon Braids!? Wow, and here I thought the entire pony race was vegetarian!

5891419 Me too! :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild: I don't agree with the name completely, but she's cute!

5891506 I've taken another look at the ending of the episode, and really like the tanned colt with the sun and sunglasses cutie mark, he might need a chapter :P

OMG finally someone did back stories for these four characters and how they met Starlight!:raritystarry: But not only that, but do it in a way that's in tone with the show!:pinkiehappy: Pinch me I'm dreaming:rainbowkiss: As much as I want the show to reveal Starlight's backstory, , I'm also curious on how our new favorite S5 characters became part of her creepy little town.
You did Party Favor proud in this chapter:heart: I love how Party Favor is acting out a life as if Pinkie Pie would if she let Cheese Sandwich replace her. Bravo! This is so in character and believable, and I love how Starlight has a way of finding the ponies who have posted their way and know their names. You should explore in a future chapter how she does that.

Again, another in character and believable and fabulous chapter!:heart::raritystarry: I love how Sugar Belle is like a combination of Sweetie Belle & Mr. And Mrs. Cake with her life, her decisions, and her personality. :twilightsmile: I can't wait for Night Glider's chapter and Double Diamond's chapter...especially Double Diamond's chapter:rainbowkiss: Do you ship Double Diamond and Starlight together? Because when Double D finds his skiis in the season premier, I could sense some kind of romantic past between the two. I mean, he was her right hoof stallion after all for some kind of reason:raritywink: But you don't have to if you don't want to because so far your story is perfect the way it is:pinkiehappy:

5891571 You're very kind, thank you so much! I'm really happy that you're enjoying the stories. Double Diamond's chapter will be up soon :) He's my favorite of the group too, his design is so original and cool, and he says some super cute phrases during the episode. I think we will end up hearing about Starlight's back story in the show itself at the end of Season 5, after all she did run away and she does still have the power to remove cutie marks. It's a pretty dangerous magic to have, I'm sure we will see her again!

First off, sledging is what one does with a team of dogs (the term one should use is sledding{minor quibble}) and second, DD's mark is one of three snowflakes. Other than that this is a very interesting take on the Markless four.

5894570 Oh shit you're right! Fixed it, thank you. We don't get much snow where I live, I'm a tad unfamiliar with the activities :P

despite a few minor errors like what cowbrony ponted out, the stoies themselves sound very believable. almost like they could be what actually happened.

5894633 Thank you, I think Night Glider's story is going to be a little tougher than the others, but will see what I can do.

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well, if anyone can pull it off, im sure you can. just write what feels right to you.:twilightsmile:

Squeeeeeee!(fan girl style):pinkiehappy:It's Double Diamond's chapter, and it's better than I imagined it to be:raritystarry: Slowly clapping in the background:ajsmug:, Bravo to just everything in this chapter, Bravo:heart: Just everything makes sense from the snow games, to his friends (by the way Black Ice sounds like a cool OC:rainbowdetermined2:), to the avalanche, to Double Diamond's reflection, to Starlight's entrance and creepy hug at the end, just amazing:yay: This chapter definitely reminded me of The Wonderbolt Academy episode, especially if Rainbow Dash was reckless with Lighting Dust and the Mane 5 got hurt in the process. Love it!,My only question is what's the name of the town or area that Double Diamond is from?

Hooray a new chapter! Yes! I can't tell you how much I look forward to these chapters:pinkiehappy: And now, after this one, I'm even more excited!!!:yay: I wonder where the story will go after this and what the next chapter will be like. That's a sign if good writing, so kudos to you:raritywink:
In terms of this chapter, I liked how Night Glider's decision was based on one pony, her best friend. They, in a way, had a Fluttershy/Rainbow Dash, which was very cute...til the end which became very tragic and sad. At that point, Dusk Diver didn't really act like Fluttershy. But that's okay. Because Dusk Diver was acting at that point on her emotions, I wonder if she'll try to find Night Glider and reunite with her in the cutiemarkless town. Also, are you going to name this town in your story or no?

Comment posted by StoryDragon deleted Apr 30th, 2015

How does Starlight know where and when someone is having a cutie mark problem? :rainbowhuh:

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