She must stay calm, she mustn't give up.
She'll find a way out, till then, she must hold her breath.
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This line just sort of stops.
Other than that, great story! I feel that Moon's Character was portrayed very well here.
5869987 Oops, didn't notice that. Thanks for pointing it out.
Wow, this IS surprisingly dark! Color me impressed.
5871012 Didn't really plan it to be dark, it just somehow ended that way.
This is good - if you got a proofreader/editor it could be great.
That is nasty. Thumbs up.
5873956 Glad you liked it
Making something from the show into a story with surprises. Impressive.
5884024 Thanks
Dude wtf???
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6004176 I don't hate it, it just made me think if that was me.......
6004966 Yeah, I can see what you mean. That would be pretty scary stuff if one was to end up in the same position.
Hm, I kinda find it hard to feel sympathetic for someone who would doom the majority of life on equestrian to death via starvation. Sun is kinda important haha.
There no other free energy source in most food chains.
Still for all that, choking but unable to die for 1000 years is a pretty horrifying prospect. She could just stay in her shadowform to wait it out without pain.