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Damn you... I wanted to write this :rainbowwild:

5866317 Nothin' stopping you!

5866321 lol you already did it :p
thats ok, though, because I know the quality of your writing is excallent :twilightsmile:

This is one of those rare stories on the site that if you replaced all the horse related words and phrases with 'people' ones, put it (along with all the other related stories) into soem kind of collection, you could definitely make a living off of.

This is really fantastic. I've been looking for something like this on here for eons and I can't get over how well it was done; the way you never beat anyone over the head with lengthy bits of exposition and just let the story flow almost too naturally was great. Really, really, really great.

I'm throwing this up with all the other stories you've written in my favourites for sure. Heck, I'd even follow you again if I could (It is the Friendship Is Magic Fan Fiction equivalent of liking someone's Facebook status after all,)

11/10. Keep up the stellar performance.

5868545 *Obi-Wan voice* Guy_Incognito, now that's a name I haven't heard in many years...


Thanks, Guy!

5869026

No problem.

In this entirely selfish fashion, I have this subconscious belief that if I read enough of your stories some of your genius might rub off on me. Regardless of that I'm always on board for more of your Rainbow/Rarity stuff, or really just anything you want to write in the future.

Keep up the great work, bud.

(Summary, nitpick)

The Mitou, great monsters out of myth and legend, have surrounded the capitol of the Crystal Empire.

If I understand situation correctly: capital

6093036 unless they are trying to seize the means of production, of course

Wooooow.
This didn't feel like clop at all. Beautiful, loving, honest instead.

Very beautifully done. You have more talent than you realize.

7848643 I have no idea why, but this one way way easier for me to to do at the time.

Just realized... at some point, Rarity had her hind leg between Dash's. So it's possible the last thing that leg did prior to being lost to war was... Rainbow Dash. hahahahaahahahahah

9932515
that is terrible but also, lmao

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